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Published: 2004-08-21 00:32:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 180; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Suffering from emotive necrophelia.Sadness revived to be drowned in pain.
A feast of sorrow made flesh in your thoughts,
A compulsive habit of which you cannot refrain.
A mental struggle which cannot be won.
Your mind's unjust retching, succumbed in defeat.
It has not yet ended, it merely begun,
With a blast of agony, sanity blows its retreat.
Pain burns away before truth's naked eye,
Lulling the senses into serene flight.
It's only illusion, a self-induced lie.
Please heed the following words in your mind:
"I plead on my knees, I cry at the thought,
of you sitting there, alone in the dark.
When holding the steel,Β Β it's edge upon skin,
Please read this through, and do not begin"
Comments: 14
kid4life-X [2004-09-06 15:29:47 +0000 UTC]
heh! very kool!
ur an emotional time-bomb...i guess.
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SapphireIce [2004-08-21 19:18:55 +0000 UTC]
WOW! VERY nice and VERY sad!
I agree with Vesagrelem: you might have to counter it with a happy poem!
Keep up the PHENOMENTAL work!
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Deesse-Lover [2004-08-21 14:02:07 +0000 UTC]
I can't clearly tell what I feel about that poem. It touches things too deep inside I guess.
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Vesagrelem [2004-08-21 09:50:40 +0000 UTC]
Whey nice one, very heavy on the depressive content. May have to counter with a very happy poem....
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itsgot2bme [2004-08-21 03:14:50 +0000 UTC]
wow.... this is so beautiful hun i'll talk to you more about it on aim... don't want to say a lot of personal things here. but...
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Isiena [2004-08-21 01:23:58 +0000 UTC]
Eep, look at all that capitals. o_o;; I don't know who this is referring to, but it is a powerful message. Necrophelia? .... okay. [shifty eyes]
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Timetwister In reply to Isiena [2004-08-21 01:26:21 +0000 UTC]
it is symbolic, not to be taken literally, what was meant was sort of the digging up and abuse of emotions, and concerning the capitals, ye I know, it's smthn I can't undo, it's my curse
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Isiena In reply to Timetwister [2004-08-21 01:28:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh trust me I knew about the necrophelia metaphor, what with the other verses you wrote it fit together. = P
[Get MSWord, they will take care of your curse... and maybe create another]
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Timetwister In reply to Isiena [2004-08-21 01:32:19 +0000 UTC]
hehehe, nah, dont want the computer changing stuff I write lol, but in coming poems I'll try to lift the curse and bless the readers with a capital dieted poem
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Isiena In reply to Timetwister [2004-08-21 01:33:16 +0000 UTC]
capital dieted poems taste wierd. [licks computer screen?]
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