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Timkongart — Final Stand
Published: 2010-08-09 09:27:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 3038; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 38
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This took a while, mainly because i've never drawn so many characters in one image,but learnt alot in the short run, final image came out relatively decent.
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Oh this is awesome!! You should make this into a comic 
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amazzzzzzzzing work ...... your color so awesome
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Whow cool! I think there is a big improvement compared to your olb images. this one look smore finished and detailed
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Thanks Nick 
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Hey Tim,
Wow, great detail work and colours.
You've really got the balance with textures right, looks superb.
In specific the guy in the right foreground the lighting looks great on the armour.
The armour on the dude in the red cape is stunning, the lighting, glossiness I love.
There are a couple of things I would question though, the composition and posture don't seem as good as they could have been. I think more thumb nails were needed to try and work out the composition.
The focus is on the glowing green eye which I feel is two central. (Rule of Thirds)
The armour looks great but I cant work out if on his upper arm its armour or a tattoo, if its armour its nowhere near as good as the rest and if its a tattoo its too light.
I know his left arm maybe in line with his body but because of the pose you feel he should have two hands on the sword. Because it just looks like he hasn't got an arm. And the two amigos behind the red cape have no legs.
The narrative doesn't quite flow. I'm confused as whether the guy in the foreground is on his side or not. The green eyed dude looks like he's about to attack something on the ground not the guy in the foreground. Also get the impression he has run from the foreground cause of the cape and why is the big dude so relaxed?
That's what I see when I am being super critical.
There's no doubt this is your best piece and I praise you for what I listed at the start, there's some really great work and skill gone into certain elements of the image but I feel you can make a stronger picture the next time around.
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Hey man, thanks for the critique its very helpful and i'm really grateful for the advice.
Yeah i had my fair share of problems on this, alot of the things u pointed out were due to poor planning at the start especially regarding the arm and pose. The big guy did orignally have a sword, however i removed it because it was far distracting the view from the middle guy unfortunately I couldn't change it since by then I already rendered most of his arm.
I'll fix some of the stuff like tatoo and legs in a moment. Thanks for the critique man they;re always welcome
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No worries mate, credit to you I know you will take it in and come back better every time. You improve with every submission.
I really need to do more work, but holiday first, then 3d showreel to do when I get back, o and try get a job.
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ok, probably in the Middle-Age there were not monsters with shining eyes, but who knows 
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wow I can smell the atmosphere from it like I move to the Middle-Age
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