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Published: 2004-05-26 10:47:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 172; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 43
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Description He’s driving down a well-lit road
Driving way too fast
In his mind he’s somewhere else
He’s living in the past

The people are yelling at him to stop
But he is deaf to their cries
They’re begging, pleading with no avail
There’s no way he can reply

He thinks back to when it all started
When this twisted story begins
In his life, he’s never right
He never wins

He sees the bridge rapidly coming up
He looks back at his son
He’s been waiting all his life for this moment
His life, the sad existence, is finally done
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Comments: 6

donlee [2004-06-12 01:06:06 +0000 UTC]

is the road he's driving down a metaphor for his life?

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dravendesignnet [2004-06-02 13:58:13 +0000 UTC]

thats sad, but poeticly speaking a very talented peice of work, good job bro

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fishyfishyfishy [2004-05-29 23:56:32 +0000 UTC]

great poem well done!
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XxtearstainedxX [2004-05-26 22:38:56 +0000 UTC]

lovely structure I love how it flows to prevail every given momment
im curious though, is there some meaning to the no tittle?

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TimN In reply to XxtearstainedxX [2004-05-27 03:34:22 +0000 UTC]

nar i just couldnt think of a title lol !

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XxtearstainedxX In reply to TimN [2004-05-27 18:33:17 +0000 UTC]

ok hahaha

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