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Laura Marie----- The Splash is because she didn't want any nudes published ------
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OG--san [2020-06-26 09:37:26 +0000 UTC]
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jankware [2012-04-17 22:09:36 +0000 UTC]
Overall
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Impact
She looks amazingly beautiful and has stunning facial features. The shopped in splash of water is a little to animated looking and at first glance the necklace looked to be shopped in as well but I think this is due to the fact that more light is caught by the materials the necklace is made of.
The light on her body is much dimmer than her face and shoulders even though you can see there is a light shinning on her skin in the dark parts of the photo, I think this appearance makes it so it looks like her head was shopped onto a different body.
-Overall its nicely done with the lighting and color's to make her face really pop, but certain area's just look too fake like they don't go together.
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timothylgreen In reply to jankware [2012-04-18 09:48:02 +0000 UTC]
I believe I could have brought the Red Saturation down a bit in her neck area. Skin looks a bit rough there, I see what you mean by put her face on a different body. But, I will post more photos of her soon. She has an absolutely AMAZING Body & Beautiful face.
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timothylgreen In reply to jankware [2012-04-18 09:45:23 +0000 UTC]
I agree with you about the Splash, I like the photo MUCH better with out it, but She is not comfortable have topless/nude photos of her on the internet yet. She is young and I am sure she will come around, until then...
I could redo the water rendering to make it look more realistic, I don't really care for the way it angles down to the bottom on the right side of the photo.
The right side shoulder, is to bright. But it started looking funny when I tried to bring down the exposure in that area.
Thank you for your Critique, I do appreciate feed back ALOT. Also, the necklace is real.
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jankware In reply to timothylgreen [2012-04-18 20:52:46 +0000 UTC]
She shouldn't be shy to show off a bit. She's amazingly beautiful.
Thanks for the comments back, I don't critique often.
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timothylgreen In reply to jankware [2012-04-19 00:52:41 +0000 UTC]
I will get her loosened up soon, her first shoot with me.
She is local, so definitely more to come.
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E-DigitalFantasy [2018-07-13 10:07:26 +0000 UTC]
Amazing capture!!! Breathtaking beauty! Wonderful shot!
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nerveZero [2012-06-16 02:16:06 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure why there is a splash in the picture, so I'm ignoring it.
I think the image has great lighting. Composition is nice and tight and adds impact.
The thing I like most about this image though is the lighting.
Awesome model too, which doesn't hurt.
Great work.
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MarkoPou In reply to nerveZero [2013-03-21 11:10:02 +0000 UTC]
the model has issues showing her bare breast. That's why.
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nerveZero In reply to MarkoPou [2013-03-22 06:49:20 +0000 UTC]
You don't know that for sure. It is possible Tim chose to add it for artistic reasons etc.
In the end it doesn't matter. Great shot. Great model. Great breasts. Just a fabulous image.
I really like the whole series with this model.
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MarkoPou In reply to nerveZero [2013-03-22 17:17:46 +0000 UTC]
Well, i knew that you will reply like that but i know the model pretty well. You won't find a single public shot that is not censored in any way.
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nerveZero In reply to MarkoPou [2013-03-23 01:42:01 +0000 UTC]
Oh. Cool. Well her body so she can do what she likes. Lovely shot.
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FFBeer [2012-04-21 18:04:40 +0000 UTC]
Seen in the group submissions of
- Aww, what a wonderful shot!
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