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tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy — A Kings Angel

Published: 2012-11-15 02:56:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 762; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 7
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Description Meet my beautiful crystal alicorn, Crystal Angel. He is from a new story I'm working on, and his past will slowly be revealed along with his relationship with King Sombra.

I actually fell in love with King Sombra during the season premier! He made me fangirl scream. I love how evil he is... And f*** the people who say he's pathetic, he took over a whole kingdom and managed to stay a real threat for the time he was cast away. He also made an entire kingdom disappear, so he's a badass.

Love him! And my little Angel, who's a delicate beauty (the reason Sombra keeps him around)


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Comments: 15

Marxie2132 [2012-11-15 04:53:34 +0000 UTC]

I was just thinking of making an alicorn that was named after an angel,in fact,I made her up today(with no official name yet)! ^_^

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tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy In reply to Marxie2132 [2012-11-15 16:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Psychic! Do you have a picture of her yet?

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Marxie2132 In reply to tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy [2012-11-16 03:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Here she is(or should I say:Was):[link]

By the way,I'd love your opinion. ^_^

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tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy In reply to Marxie2132 [2012-11-16 04:07:39 +0000 UTC]

I love her! She's awesome!

And you should totally still make an angelic alicorn! I think the idea of bringing the fallen up is cool

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Marxie2132 In reply to tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy [2012-11-16 04:11:59 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!

You'll be my inspiration! ;3

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tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy In reply to Marxie2132 [2012-11-16 04:31:03 +0000 UTC]

Aw! Thank you! I'm honored

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Marxie2132 In reply to tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy [2012-11-16 04:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy In reply to Marxie2132 [2012-11-16 05:46:03 +0000 UTC]

I so can't wait to see your angelic alicorn!

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Marxie2132 In reply to tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy [2012-11-16 19:12:21 +0000 UTC]

What do you think:[link]

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tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy In reply to Marxie2132 [2012-11-16 19:34:46 +0000 UTC]

I love her!

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Maryritai [2012-11-15 03:02:26 +0000 UTC]

You know how the fandom disapproves of Alicorns and how they usually are like super special and shit?
I think this qualifies as a minority, your OC. I do genuinely like this character, the art and King Sombra.
Since all you have stated so far is the fact it's an Alicorn, is a very beautiful pony and has a relationship with Sombra, no to mention that he is valued and treasured by him.
It's starting to sound Mary-suish but then again, you have just created this wonderful pony, then obviously you'll start to state the flaws of this character. Which I hope are some good flaws.

But yeah!
I think this has earned a watch and I hope to see this character develop!

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tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy In reply to Maryritai [2012-11-15 03:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Well, this is Angel grown up, I'm starting when he's just a foal in the story, and I left out a lot of his story.

Like, how the two met, Angel's personality (it leaves a lot to be desired), and the King Sombra I imagined for this particular story.

But thank you so much! I really am worried I might make Angel too mary-suish, it's something I totally want to avoid, but I'm hoping with Angel's character development along the way, he'll get further away from that

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Maryritai In reply to tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy [2012-11-15 20:10:37 +0000 UTC]

Hm, Maybe you should try to incorporate that into his history or make some kind of side story stating this. Though it is important to state his personality, to have a base idea of how he interacts with others and such.

No problem! Character Development is a hard thing to do and keeping them balanced is even harder. It's that fine line of the perfect mix of flaws and good things about them that make a character well-balanced.
I hope he won't turn Marysue-ish and develop really way. You could always ask people or contact me for any worries about it.

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tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy In reply to Maryritai [2012-11-15 23:14:46 +0000 UTC]

Well, his story starts when he's only three, so he's still a little kid, really. The story is fairly long, and goes over his and Sombra's history and all that.

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Maryritai In reply to tinkr-tailr-sldr-spy [2012-11-16 20:32:59 +0000 UTC]

Well, that's good ^^
Good set up and plan how it's gonna be executed!

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