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Published: 2018-07-27 08:00:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1447; Favourites: 118; Downloads: 0
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Description As promised, some Undertale fanart for Fanart friday! ^^
I had a lot of fun making this, as it has been a long time since I've drawn these characters and this kind of setting

Download on the right for High Quality version!
Kind of a re-imagining of this: 
I think it's safe to say I have grown a lot as an artist, but I still feel like there is something completely off about my illustration...

P.S. Yes, I took some artistic liberties with Frisk's outfit because I wanted to get another colour in there

Speedpaint: youtu.be/w8IrICzcJUM
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Comments: 15

EmberVampire34 [2018-07-27 12:38:03 +0000 UTC]

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(this is my first time writing a critique) I think the idea is really nice. The colours and shading are wonderful. The texture is good too, but maybe you can add a bit more? For example, the snow on the path seems to be too... smooth, you could make it a bit rough or bumpy. And Sans looks a bit weird, standing like that, I think the perspective is a bit wrong. Frisk's face strongly shows that she is scared and cold, I think you did a good job for that. This is just my opinion, you don't need to listen to me if you don't want to, I will support your point of view.

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EmberVampire34 In reply to EmberVampire34 [2018-07-28 01:55:51 +0000 UTC]

ok, thank you for listening!

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Tiny-Doodles In reply to EmberVampire34 [2018-07-27 14:18:16 +0000 UTC]

First off, thank you very much for writing a critique!
I think you're right on the snow thing, and the perspective is definitely not how I had imagined it. I am still quite new to drawing more detailed illustrations like this compared to just drawing a character in a pose on a white background. Thank you very much for the details and I'll make sure to keep it in mind for my next illustration! ^^

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anmail [2018-07-27 08:33:32 +0000 UTC]

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I really liked the idea you were going with this picture! But the vision looks kinda strange. For example the snowwy road looks like a hill but I'm not sure if you were going for that xD Other than that I really liked your shading but back where Sans is it's kinda dark so it's abit hard too see the scnery. The lighting you did with Frisk is on point though! I really liked how you did that because it really looks like end of the forest! Oh and the textures you made for bushes and Frisk's hair is also looking Fabulous! In conclusion,you just gotta try abit harder for vision but other than that I really liked it! Keep up the good work my dood!

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Tiny-Doodles In reply to anmail [2018-07-27 08:39:28 +0000 UTC]

First off, thank you very much for giving me such a detailed and fast critique!
As for the road, I was going for a bumpy road, but not necessarily a hill. Could you tell me what in particular makes it look more like a hill instead of what I was going for? I want to do more sceneries like this in the future and it would really help me out ^^
I was also going for Sans being completely (or mostly) in the dark, as I didn't know how else I could make him look as scary as possible. As you can probably tell I'm still quite new to dynamic lighting haha
Thank you very much for the compliments on the bushes and Frisk's hair! The bushes in particular were a real annoyance to do as I couldn't find a leaf brush for sai2 anywhere! 

Thank you once more for the critique, it's helped me out a lot and I now know what I should look out for more in the future

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anmail In reply to Tiny-Doodles [2018-07-27 08:50:22 +0000 UTC]

Aha no problem! And oh you were? Whoops! Well the reason that it kinda looks like a hill is because if you can look where Frisk is and then look at middle you can see the road is kinda going downhill but then when you look where Sans is you can notice the road getting a bit bumpy but still abit strange. I guess I shouldn't have called it a ''hill'' but the part where Frisk is and the middle roads connection kinda made me think of a hill...hehehe...oof. 
If you were going with a dark lighting then alright! It looks fine and now that I look at it I think the lighting problem wasn't with the art it probably was beacuse of my vision hehe...When you're in dark room it's kinda hard to figure out the scnery. But even so as a beginner for dynamic lighting,you did pretty good! And yes I get the struggle you had with the brushes ;w;

Once again,keep up the good work! (And thanks for the fast reply lol )

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StardewValleyCoconut [2018-12-17 01:50:40 +0000 UTC]

lol

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CandyClumsy [2018-07-29 23:52:54 +0000 UTC]

This is so cool!

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Tiny-Doodles In reply to CandyClumsy [2018-07-30 07:57:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I tried to use your amazing paint skills as reference but as you can still I still have a long way to go ahaha

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CandyClumsy In reply to Tiny-Doodles [2018-07-30 23:46:55 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks! My skills have gone down the drain lately so I'd say this is just pure awesome! You're already there in my opinion xD

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Tiny-Doodles In reply to CandyClumsy [2018-07-31 09:12:02 +0000 UTC]

Are you kidding? I absolutely adore the comic pages you've been uploading recently! I'm not one for comics but with your awesome visuals it keeps me engaged

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CandyClumsy In reply to Tiny-Doodles [2018-08-01 03:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! 

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TFCreeper-Writer [2018-07-29 19:45:05 +0000 UTC]

 

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Tiny-Doodles In reply to TFCreeper-Writer [2018-07-30 07:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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TFCreeper-Writer In reply to Tiny-Doodles [2018-07-31 18:14:03 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome.

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