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Published: 2012-06-07 10:19:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 261; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 3
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It failed.stock by *wyldraven [link]
could anyone tell me how to improve please
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Tigzzz [2012-06-09 07:17:51 +0000 UTC]
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WOW!! I think it's amazing!! The only improvement I have (after thinking for a long while); Maybe lighten the shadows slightly-actually, ignore me. Don't do that. The shadows seem darker when you first look at it, because of the light section at the top middleish left. I think if it were darker, that might be an improvement. It is the first thing your eye is drawn to, and I guess you were aiming for the whole picture to be focused ion the same, it being a background e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
" title="Wink/Razz"/>. Darkening that part would keep the eye away from it specifically, and allow the viewer to appreciate the rest of the wonderful picture. Especially the shadows, and light coming through the trees. I can't think how you did that, but I know it looks amazingly realistic, and enforces the picture's woodand effect. It looks superb.
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Tleetify In reply to Tigzzz [2012-06-09 07:43:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the critique! I'm planning on doing more background practices in the future so Ill take what you said on board ^^ I really appreciate that you took the time to write about my artwork. It really helps me Improve at drawing backgrounds when I get not only my opinion but other people's opinions.
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Tigzzz In reply to Tleetify [2012-06-09 08:46:25 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure!
cool!
I like writing critiques when I am in the right mood. It's fun, and I know how much people appreciate others' comments!
I'm glad you found what I said helpful
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