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Published: 2015-06-17 01:01:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 260; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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Perfect LoveI walked in the doors at school. My hoodie was soggy from the cold rain outside and my hair was plastered to my face. I pushed through the loud crowd of people to my locker. I turned the lock and opened it. The cold metal walls of the small box seemed to be even more unwelcoming than they usually were. I put my wet backpack on a hook and shivered as water began to spread over my back. I pulled my books out of my backpack and slammed the door.
"Shit," I grumbled as it closed over one of my drawstrings. My hands were full and I couldn't bend down without pulling to string through my hood. I tensed as I felt someone touch my shoulder.
"Need a hand?" A low voice laughed. I sighed as I recognized Dustin's voice behind me. He stepped in front of me and lifted my books out of my hands. I opened my locker and pulled my drawstring out. I dramatically stepped backwards as I closed my locker again. I fell against someone and they shoved me back towards Dustin.
"Watch it, freak!" I turned to
characters for my story eyy
the lame Dominican republic + Amurican and the Italian + Irish dicks are gay
oops
but
you'll see
And look original names for once
alphawolf1212 came up with Marcus though because I couldn't think of anything
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Perfect Love
I walked in the doors at school. My hoodie was soggy from the cold rain outside and my hair was plastered to my face. I pushed through the loud crowd of people to my locker. I turned the lock and opened it. The cold metal walls of the small box seemed to be even more unwelcoming than they usually were. I put my wet backpack on a hook and shivered as water began to spread over my back. I pulled my books out of my backpack and slammed the door.
"Shit," I grumbled as it closed over one of my drawstrings. My hands were full and I couldn't bend down without pulling to string through my hood. I tensed as I felt someone touch my shoulder.
"Need a hand?" A low voice laughed. I sighed as I recognized Dustin's voice behind me. He stepped in front of me and lifted my books out of my hands. I opened my locker and pulled my drawstring out. I dramatically stepped backwards as I closed my locker again. I fell against someone and they shoved me back towards Dustin.
"Watch it, freak!" I turned to
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