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Published: 2014-08-22 03:05:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 2648; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 0
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OHOHOH, is Goristro going to do more this time?!Maybe, maybe not! Either way he is mad, and likely for the same reason huhuu~ We'll see some of the aftermath next page too!
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Indeed it is~~
Hahaha, Royce'll have a small role shortly so~!
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Only cute when she's winning, though~!
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nice, i'm glad you spent the time to get his right, looks awesome
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Yar, Ame originally only had one asset and it was pretty meh compared to these!
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yeah, wonder is Gastri-whoever is gonna be as big a ham as he was before.
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ALL of the explosions!
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... for a moment, I actually forgot that Goristro had a new design.Β If his magic affinity is the same as it was in the previous run, I'm stoked to see an action scene with him before you-know-who on the chapter two cover shows up.
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Yeeep, all new design. His was definitely one of the weaker ones the first time around!
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Did I miss something or what happened to page 33? Haha. Nice to see everyone back in action. Will be excited to see how people are going to act this time around. Especially in the combat sense.
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I figured the chapter cover could count as 33! And soon~!
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That does make sense in a printed world! Haha
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Goristroooooo!
I mean come on he's a huge badass, he has/had to do more =w=
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Aye! His role is still fairly minimal in the beginning, but he'll get his day in the sun!
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This gonna be one hell of a fight. XD
Get it? Hell of a fight.........heummm nevermind.
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I'm a bit confused here. How exactly did she fire it? We see her charging it, but we don't see her laucnhing it nor do we see if it hit anything. We just see an explosion in the dark.Β And didn't Emerald and Carval already fire their projectiles in the last page? I don't see their attacksΒ anywhere.
Also, the background kind of confuses me since it is mostly just stars for some reason. Does charging "Devil Drive" mess around with the enviroment or is it just a special effect you wanted to add? And Goristro looks more calm/constipated than he looks angry.
I'm still looking forward for what is about to come, especially with Goristro, but I think that the page could have used some more work. Please don't take this the hard way.
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It's a quick recap of the events in the previous chapter, thus the 2nd utterance of 'DEVIL DRIVE', I admittedly took some liberties though! Especially with Ame's posing, I wanted to spice it up. The backgrounds just a special effect.
Hey, don't worry about it! I appreciate all the feedback dude <3 I read every bit, and I like to keep it all in mind so I can improve and strengthen my weaknesses as time goes on! You're cordial and constructive, and that's more than one could ask for.
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Huh, well he's still standing at least, that's something.
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Yar, he's not in the fray - yet!
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I am an anime, ANTI-GRAV ALL DAY EVERY DAY.
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I don't know if the others know this but AME KNOW HOW TO LAY A SMACK DOWN ON A BITCH!
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AME DOESN'T KNOW MUCH.
BUT SHE KNOWS HOW TO LAY THE SMACKDOWN.
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Oooh Β like the effects for Devil Drive. So it sits for a second now before it forms and explodes? Like two gases coming together? Β Β
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Yep, since it's an amalgamation spell! They combust!
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OOOOH I see now, like Rip and Tear, the Red and the Black, so the red and black gas forms together and then... POW! That was a really good idea, is this a representation of her Mother's and her own Power?Β
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Nah, the spell itself is an amalgamation, and it has a sister spell that Asmodai can use as well!
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Wait, how did I miss giant-breasted secretary-succubus?
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goristro is showing up? this is gonna be ugly
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Gon mop the floor with that beard!
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at 1st thought she was giving the bird but noticed it was her index finger 
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Hahaha, easy mistake! And I'm sure she will~
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X3 it was the magic effect it was a little dark near the hand that's what threw me off 83
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Well, looks like someone sure has the balls to be calling Ame a bitch.
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Goristro bout to be roasted for it, I imagine!
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