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Problems, out with the old and in with the new? Things will be calming down regardless!Hopefully I didn't flub the perspective too bad here pfff.
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To be fair for Emerald, the other option DID involve letting that dome break and watching those delicious human morsels die from the toxic atmosphere, so.....
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Wait, is this what we'll get from Emerald for now? Nooooo! ;_;
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Ryo or Syranon have finally caught up to her, I imagine.
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It's the law
"I'm sorry ma'am, this is a booty free zone, you can't lay there, you'll have to move or i'll issue you a ticket"
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AUGH, LOITERING. Ame is so evil. :C
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Oh man, i know that feeling, i know that feeling so much
you just went through hell in a handbasket, things got more real than they needed too, you just wanna go home, find some pizza, and relax over a nice game of Disgaea or something, and then before you can even clear the scene, someone else just wants to add to the misery.
although notebaly, that does NOT look like Ryo's shadow to me so..
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OH, BUT IT ISSS~! I even used her head for the panel's shadow har.
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i know this now
and then i looked back here
i guess i'm a moron when it comes to shadows
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I bet you drew the bottom left panel like Amethyst was in a modeling studio getting the pictures done for Sexy Demons Weekly.
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Suddenly I imagined Ame saying "BYEEEEEE~" in an adorable voice...
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You're really stressing the 180 rule for a glamour shot in the last three panels. :/
Also, the crack looks weird without an epicenter.
1076
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I actually had to look that rule up, as I was unaware of it, I'll be sure to keep that in mind!
Yeah, a central bit would help sell it more wouldn't it? ;;
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Oh! It's a really fundamental camera rule. You're usually pretty good about it, so I figured you knew.
I don't think anyone else really cares about the crack, honestly. I just figured as long as I was nitpicking, I might as well nitpick it all. XP
1076
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Nah, most things about sequential bits I've learned over time on my own. So I'm like 'OOOH, A TERM. WHATISIT.'
Haaar!
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Something tells me that is not over yet. XD
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And in comes the complicating factor... she just can't get a rest today can she?
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REST IS FOR THE WEAK. ...Not that Ame'd mind ;;
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Couldn't help but grin a bit, at the whole "Byeeeeeee~" panel.
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it never over the first time you think it is. Or the third. Usually the fourth is where you have a 50-50 chance of it really being over.
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How sensible for the usually violent demons, but even though they all appear young I forget none of them are.
Looks like it's time for her to meet a certain Paladin. I was wondering how he ended up so far behind, the police/guards must be on their way by now.
Everything looked fine to me but Emerald's boobs aren't where they should be given her boobs are usually up and in place via super bra. They usually look like they have under support; [link] (like here) here it looks like they are hanging out with no bra. The other thing is, as I showed with my example a while back, Ame's arms look small because she has those big things, she's about....5"4- 5"6 the way she is drawn, making them look even bigger.
Sidenote: If Emerald has this big of a chest, and she is to carry someone who is about....90-100 lbs give or take, she should be carrying him over the shoulders, in piggy back fashion, so the weight distributes evenly over her frame. Also, keep in mind within your own story the other humans and police/guards do not know Emerald made a deal to leave and if she doesn't vanish soon they won't let her walk out of there, and she's slowed down now that she's carrying someone.
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Naaah, you may be surprised~!
Yar, I tend to flipflop between anti-grav boobs and showing a fair bit of sag, I gotta work on that ;;
Emerald was able to throw a 200 lb man hundreds of meters in the air, strength is hardly an issue there!
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I know how strong she is; those things are going to get in the way
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so when does the doom fall and hordes among hordes of demons flood the city?
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Give or take a dozen chapters, har!
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i want to be a human with a grenade launcher when that happens, gotta make some go boom
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frying pan, fire, blah.
Also, that wave is the funniest part of this whole thing.
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