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Published: 2011-09-14 05:31:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 623; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Description It was early in the morning, 6:00 AM to be exact, and almost all the residents in Ponyville were still asleep, all but three. One was the red stallion SunnyStorm observing the massive dark cloud starting to form over the town, another was the other red stallion Big Macintosh taking his daily early Sunday walk around the apple orchard of Sweet Apple Acres, his family's apple farm, and the last pony was the ever so shy, light yellow pegasus mare Fluttershy. Something collapsed inside her cottage on the outskirts of town over night and she was inspecting the damage, it was not too bad a group of bird houses got too heavy for a branch inside the cottage to support so it can tumbling down leaving a hole in the side of the house.
Fluttershy knew she had to get the hole patched up so she set out to find Big Mac for some help. Meanwhile Sunny was checking on his weather equipment on the top of his house by the west side of town, after he double checked his calculations again he muttered to himself, "Hoo boy." The results said that there was going to be a storm later on that day, when he did not know, and it was going to be big. So SS went back downstairs and started to write up his weather report for the day.
"Well howdy there Fluttershy." Big Mac said as he saw the yellow pegasus mare land right next to him among the rows of apple trees.
"Good morning Big Macintosh," Fluttershy replied in her usual soft, kind and almost inaudible voice. "um... recently a bunch of bird houses has caused a branch inside my house to fall, so I was wondering if you can um.... come over and help me fix it.....if you are not busy today..."
"Don't worry, I have Sundays off, so I will be able to come over to help." the red stallion replied looking at Fluttershy with his gentle green eyes.
"Thank you Big Macintosh, but are you sure you are willing to do this." the pegasus replied who could not help but blush under Big Mac's gentle gaze, she did not know why she did though.
"Aw, it's no problem Fluttershy, it's the least I can do to help out one of AppleJack's friends. And please, call me Big Mac."
"Ok than... Big Mac, I um.... guess I shall see you later." the yellow mare said as she lifted off and started to weave between the apple trees back to her cottage.
"See ya later Fluttershy." Big Mac called back as he went back to walking around the orchard, he always felt something in his heart when she was around but he brushed it off like he usually did. And that was just the beginning.
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Comments: 16

Nsnf [2013-09-29 00:33:19 +0000 UTC]

I thought it was adorable and i love it

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ToadLink In reply to Nsnf [2013-10-06 23:50:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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TruthSender [2011-11-14 21:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Stop hating xD
Or i will use ORBITAL FRIENDSHIP CANON

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ToadLink In reply to TruthSender [2011-11-14 23:19:19 +0000 UTC]

Since when was I hating?

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TruthSender In reply to ToadLink [2011-11-14 23:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Nevermind

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ToadLink In reply to TruthSender [2011-11-14 23:31:37 +0000 UTC]

I thought so...

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redphienix [2011-10-10 18:31:08 +0000 UTC]

Some grammar bits/sentence structure problems here and there, but acceptable.

SS checking for weather didn't seem out there, but pegasus 'normally' have complete control unless the weather is 'other worldly' like from the Everfree- but it isn't a huge deal for a verse to run one way or the other so the only real complaint against this I have is personal preference

As for the story- Cute Off to read through the rest xD ('less something comes up in which I'll put it off ;-; )

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ToadLink In reply to redphienix [2011-10-10 21:06:32 +0000 UTC]

I see, just tell me where they are and I'll get to work on them right away.

Well the thing is, I find it highly illogical that pegasi have total control of the weather patterns of Equestria, I'm going to stop right there for it will initiate rant mode and the comment would be too long.

Also I thank you for all the favorites.

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redphienix In reply to ToadLink [2011-10-10 21:12:54 +0000 UTC]

No worries in the least, and running through this with a comb would take a while and a large note/comment most likely >_>
<_<

Maybe another time sadly :/ I hate to say that, but this moment isn't prime ;-;

As I said, all personal preference- Total control isn't EXACTLY what I mean but I still find it strange to have pegasi suddenly at the beck and call of nature (seeing how in Equestria they have control over her not the other way around).


Personal Preference! So no worries

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ToadLink In reply to redphienix [2011-10-10 21:20:25 +0000 UTC]

I can understand that now is not the time do what you need to do and I'll be patient about.

I see, and don't worry I'm planning to write, or in this case type, a journal about it anyway.

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partiallyBatty [2011-09-14 05:55:11 +0000 UTC]

Not too bad of a start
Also, quick question: don't pegasi ponies usually make the weather?

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ToadLink In reply to partiallyBatty [2011-09-14 05:57:20 +0000 UTC]

No, I am not making the weather I am merely predicting the weather. And I think pegasi ponies can alter the weather not create it.

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partiallyBatty In reply to ToadLink [2011-09-14 06:00:43 +0000 UTC]

I know you weren't exactly making the weather ^^
It's just that, in the shows canon, it has been shown that the pegasi up in Cloudsdale make the various aspects of weather (i.e. clouds and rainbows) and use those to make certain weather conditions

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ToadLink In reply to partiallyBatty [2011-09-14 06:08:25 +0000 UTC]

I know, but the weather should also happen naturally too so that is I wrote that.

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partiallyBatty In reply to ToadLink [2011-09-15 05:57:53 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...I guess
But it is still a great start

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ToadLink In reply to partiallyBatty [2011-09-15 06:12:14 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you.

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