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Description This picture was drawn as illustration for the short Azula-and-Zuko-centric fanfic below. Comments on either or both would be greatly appreciated--they're kind of a single package.

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Blessed Are the Weak
an A:TLA fic by tobu ishi

The facts were overwhelmingly in her favor--the hedgemice were a gift to both royal children, after all, a matched pair as white as snow with bright black eyes and prickles softly tipped with gray. And it was the princess who came running into her mother's chambers just before dinnertime, eyes wide and limned with her usual bright energy, exclaiming that the kitchen cat had gotten into the box and tipped it over and there were shavings and bits of prickles everywhere, and it was all very exciting, and could they please send someone to clean it up? And when questioned about how the cat had gotten into the prince's rooms, she had tilted her china-doll face just a degree to one side, hands clasped behind her back, and murmured in the most bemused and innocent of tones, "I don't know...maybe the cook left the door open?"

And after all, the sturdy box hadn't fallen on its own, and what eight year old would be so morbid?

And so her mother had left to question the cook, and Azula strolled across the rug with her hands still tucked behind her back, to where her brother sat crying over the little prickly bodies, stroking a fingertip down their tiny folded ears and velvet noses. Leaning over, she pinched his ear until he looked up, and then smiled her sweetest smile for him.

"Sissy."

"Go away," he growled, glaring up at her with swollen eyes.

"Father's going to be disgusted with you," she pointed out mildly. "The prince of the Fire Nation, crying like a baby over a couple of dead hedgemice."

Zuko's lip trembled, and he bit it. "They were your pets, too."

"Oh, I know," she said, rolling her eyes. "Two smelly baby rats with spines, compliments of that pompous dimwit General Yan. Grief is not the emotion that comes to mind."

For a split second he looked shocked and wounded--and then his eyes narrowed in furious realization. "You did it."

"Don't be silly," Azula murmured, buffing her nails on the collar of her qipao. "I'm not a cat, dum-dum."

"You let the cat in," Zuko said, sitting up to stare at her with the conviction of the eternal victim. "You pushed the box over. You didn't care what happened to them!" He choked on a hiccup, clutching the dead hedgemice protectively to his chest. He was used to his sister's insults and scapegoating, but this...! "You're as bad as that cat! It didn't even eat them, it just killed them for the fun of it!"

She gave him a long thoughtful look, crossing her arms as she took in his tear-streaked face, red and blotchy and utterly ridiculous.

"You know, Zuzu," she said, tapping her lower lip with one finger and ignoring his squawk of protest, "I think there's a lesson to be learned here." She pointed at the huddled bodies cradled in his hands. "Some things in life are little and soft and helpless...and some things," she spread her hands philosophically, "have claws. And sometimes the things with claws like to prey on the little, soft, helpless things." She smiled at him, fondly. "Like you said. Just for the fun of it. So all the little soft things can really do...is stay out of their way."

He was boggle-eyed now, his mouth dropped open, stunned. It was a terrifically stupid expression, she thought to herself, amused. Like a cowpig chewing cud.

"That's life, Zuzu," she continued gaily. "Get used to it."

"Azula--!" he sputtered, but she was already walking away, slipping out through the curtains.

"I'm going to go talk to Father," she was saying, cheerfully. "Maybe we can have a salamander this time. That's what I wanted in the first place. Go wash your face," she added over her shoulder, "you look like last year's festival mask left out in the rain."

And the curtains fell closed behind her; and the prince sat on the carpet with his hands full of tiny torn bodies, and realized at last that he was shaking, not only with anger, but with fear.

It was just the beginning.

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Comments: 102

TobuIshi In reply to ??? [2007-11-06 09:00:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you got a kick out of it. ^^

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kareytown22 In reply to TobuIshi [2007-11-06 23:30:53 +0000 UTC]

totally

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SarcasticLeaves [2007-08-13 00:12:27 +0000 UTC]

Poor Zuko. I love the fanfic and the picture, so much emotion. ^_^

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TobuIshi In reply to SarcasticLeaves [2007-08-13 11:31:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad people are still enjoying it. <3 (I'll have to do another sometime, I think.)

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lady-of-the-whip [2007-07-30 03:11:15 +0000 UTC]

(Hey! You may know me somewhat... you posed for a picture for Tracy for a contest of mine? Also, we're in an RP together. *grins* I'm Inara.)

MAN. This was a great one to stumble across during my catch-up-on-Avatar week, and ESPECIALLY after watching Zuko Alone. As I'm going through the series, I keep thinking that, while they're able to keep things lighthearted, some of the aspects are just so DARK, and it's so rare for any kind of animated show to trust kids to be able to deal with it.

But watching Zuko Alone just completely surprised me. That they'd portray such a genuinely fucked up family on Nickelodeon, and that they'd even imply the business with Zuko's mother, really impressed me. And the episode was damned chilling, obviously, and I like to be chilled once in a while.

And reading this fic with all those feelings fresh in my head was great. I know everyone's said it already, but you have such a great grasp of the characters. The "claws" monologue? So very Azula that it gave me shivers! I'd love to see you do more fic with her, because you've really got her voice down. And, of course, you did great with poor Zuko. As much as the poor kid desperately needs a cluebat to the face sometimes, I love him.

Heh, sorry for this superramble of a comment. ANYWAYS, I'm really impressed with your work here, so I'mma watch you now!

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TobuIshi In reply to lady-of-the-whip [2007-08-05 12:53:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for this comment. It's so rare to get an in-depth review like this, and it always helps improve one's work. It totally made my day. <3

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sorelslaststand [2007-07-29 16:58:47 +0000 UTC]

*snarls* Evil Azula!!! GRRRRRAAAAAAHHHHHH!! Poor hedgemice, poor Zuko. They were both really in character, though.

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TobuIshi In reply to sorelslaststand [2007-07-30 09:39:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <3 I think the general consensus of readers of this fic is that Azula deserves a good slap, which is pleasing.

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Sea-mist [2007-07-24 16:15:48 +0000 UTC]

Um. . .hmmm. . .

Let me see. . . .

How can I even begin to tell you how awsome this is?! First off the picture is good, Azula's evily amused smirk and the hurt and fear in Zuko's expression as he holds the poor little hedgemice.
Second, the story blew my mind, it sounds just like something that should have happened in Zuko alone. Everyone was perfectly in charactor, to the point that I am jealous.

Azula doing something wrong and then using her innocent looks to cover her smirk, then the miniature sociopath's speech about things with claws, that sounded just like Azula.
Zuko was right on too, poor little guy, its a wonder he survived his childhood. . .

I liked the last part: "And the curtains fell closed behind her; and the prince sat on the carpet with his hands full of tiny torn bodies, and realized at last that he was shaking, not only with anger, but with fear.

It was just the beginning"

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TobuIshi In reply to Sea-mist [2007-07-25 09:31:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow. It's so rare to get an in-depth comment like this...thank you, so much. You've made my day. ^_^ And thank you for the content of the comment, as well...I'm glad you enjoyed it, and tickled that you think I kept everybody IC, since that's one of my Paramount Goals!

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Sea-mist In reply to TobuIshi [2007-07-25 23:10:09 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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DragonDancer11 [2007-07-15 13:31:27 +0000 UTC]

The... *hic* poor... *cries* baby!!!!!!!

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HowCanIimprove In reply to ??? [2007-06-22 00:40:22 +0000 UTC]

wow simply...AMAZING! you portray zuko...and azula as well..some ppl over do azulas cunning evil but you did it just right ^_^ and the picture is amazing! love it all!!!

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TobuIshi In reply to HowCanIimprove [2007-06-22 03:48:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! Azula's hard to pin down, but I'm glad you liked what I did with her! ^_^

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insanityblob [2007-05-20 22:39:32 +0000 UTC]

Fabulous!

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TobuIshi In reply to insanityblob [2007-05-21 04:32:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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darksporechild [2007-05-18 17:15:59 +0000 UTC]

hehe If you don't mind, I'd like to put the story on my handheld computer so I can read it at school. That okay with you?

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TobuIshi In reply to darksporechild [2007-05-18 21:20:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that'd be fine. ^_^ I'm flattered!

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PhantomWolf [2007-05-16 02:30:39 +0000 UTC]

Nice story and pic, too. Azula is suck a...

Well done!

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darksporechild [2007-05-06 21:11:28 +0000 UTC]

When my cat had her kittens the other day, this story is exactly what first came to mind. Especially when I pick the kittens up. My mind flashes back to the picture with their poor little fragile bodies.

And mostly because of this story, I'm going to name one of the black and white ones Zuko. Unless it's a girl. Then I'm naming it Ursa. I wanted to name the two black and white ones Zuko and Azula, but my mom won't let me name it Azula.

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TobuIshi In reply to darksporechild [2007-05-07 10:36:45 +0000 UTC]

Well, isn't naming a kitten "Azula" a bit of a downer for the poor kitten's future personality? ^_^ I wouldn't wish that name on any young impressionable creature. It might grow up trying to claw its littermates apart.

Ursa's a much gentler choice for a namesake. Oh, and it's got all sorts of neat associations with bears and Greek mythology, too. Y'know, though, you could always just fudge it and name a girl kitten Zuko and tell people it's a Japanese name. "-ko" is a suffix for girl's names in Japanese. Lots of laughter about that one between me and my friends, believe me.

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uhanekahu In reply to ??? [2007-04-20 17:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Gah! *faves* This fills me with so much joy, and I'm always happy after reading a good fanfic that keeps them IC <3

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TobuIshi In reply to uhanekahu [2007-04-22 10:26:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I do try my hardest to keep people IC...some days I could swear I'm not only married to canon, but barefoot and preggers in its kitchen. ;

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uhanekahu In reply to TobuIshi [2007-04-23 00:00:02 +0000 UTC]

XD <3 that sentance alone has made you my favorite person in life.

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TobuIshi In reply to uhanekahu [2007-04-23 08:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Marvelous! <3 I also slice, dice, and julienne...

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darksporechild In reply to TobuIshi [2007-05-06 17:45:19 +0000 UTC]

You slice dice etc. babies? *mutters something about Azula*

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blackdog9 In reply to ??? [2007-04-17 06:37:22 +0000 UTC]

y'know sometimes you feel like ya just wanna give the little twerp one good something, but then I think "she's just not worth the effort" -__-

Wonderfully sad fic you've written there
You really got their personalities

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Alycat [2007-04-15 20:58:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, this was amazing. There we go, Azula, showing early signs of the little sociopath you're going to grow up to be.

Now, I really hope Zuko kicks her butt in season three. Avenge the hedgemice!

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TobuIshi In reply to Alycat [2007-04-16 00:03:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow, somebody else who believes she's a clinical sociopath! Sweetness. ^_^ And yeah, justice for the hedgemice! We need a logo or something.

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Alycat In reply to TobuIshi [2007-04-16 00:20:42 +0000 UTC]

She has all the markings of one! She's extremely charismatic with strong leadership capabilities, and yet shows not signs of what could be considered the "weaker" emotions like empathy, sympathy, and heaven forbid we ever make the mistake of thinking she has a concious. O_o

*laughs* Yes, we do!

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darksporechild [2007-04-15 17:17:09 +0000 UTC]

Let me at her! Let me at her! *tries to attack Azula before realizing there's a computer screen in the way*

Oof.

Well done!

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TobuIshi In reply to darksporechild [2007-04-16 00:00:29 +0000 UTC]

Whoops--careful there. XD And thank you!

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darksporechild In reply to TobuIshi [2007-04-16 21:05:16 +0000 UTC]

Or cat Smudge is going to have kittens, and when my sister mentioned something about "if they survive" I instantly thought of this. Funny, considering that she is the same age as Azula in Book 2 (and my age as Zuko's)

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swan-swan In reply to ??? [2007-04-15 15:52:19 +0000 UTC]

What a BRAT....


That was GOOD. That was canon-esque!!!

Poor Zuzu....

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TobuIshi In reply to swan-swan [2007-04-15 23:59:27 +0000 UTC]

*grins* Thanks! Just the reaction I hoped for, thank goodness.

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deactivated-9876 [2007-04-15 14:06:40 +0000 UTC]

AAAA! This is awesome!

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TobuIshi In reply to deactivated-9876 [2007-04-15 23:58:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! <3

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deactivated-9876 In reply to TobuIshi [2007-04-16 14:27:19 +0000 UTC]

no problem!

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Red-Rogue-Angel In reply to ??? [2007-04-15 09:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Great job! I <3 Zuko. Mmhmm... ^_^

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TobuIshi In reply to Red-Rogue-Angel [2007-04-15 09:47:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks--poor little wooblet, he never catches a break.

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heartsyhawk In reply to ??? [2007-04-15 06:39:43 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that was quite dark and depressing...but soooo very accurate to both Prince Zuko and Princess Azula. The thing about some things being soft and some things having claws and using them for fun sounds just like something canon Azula would say. Really awesome job

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TobuIshi In reply to heartsyhawk [2007-04-15 09:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^ I seem to have managed to depress a lot of my friends with that picture (even the ones who don't watch Avatar), which wasn't my intent, but I guess it's a good testimonial...?

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Makosharkman In reply to TobuIshi [2009-05-20 03:51:38 +0000 UTC]

dont Zuko and Azula look cute as children.

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heartsyhawk In reply to TobuIshi [2007-04-15 23:58:25 +0000 UTC]

It's depressing but emotional as well. Poor little hedgemice...

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TobuIshi In reply to heartsyhawk [2007-04-16 00:07:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, little helpless things and Azula don't mix well. >_>;;

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ed00 In reply to TobuIshi [2009-02-10 13:20:11 +0000 UTC]

becuse she has to prove she has claws

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heartsyhawk In reply to TobuIshi [2007-04-16 00:13:47 +0000 UTC]

This is why I fear what would happen if she ever has children...

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darksporechild In reply to heartsyhawk [2007-04-16 21:07:31 +0000 UTC]

*snorts milk from nose* That was hilarious in the way I find things funny.

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Saisu In reply to ??? [2007-04-15 03:55:15 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoyed this actually. You really kept the characters.. well.. in-characters. And that line about some things 'having claws' sounds exactly like something out of the show. Good job, the art fits perfectly as well.

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TobuIshi In reply to Saisu [2007-04-15 03:57:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <3 I ran this past three betas before I uploaded it--being in-character is very important to me.

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