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Tomek1000 — Guardians of Dimensions page 1
Published: 2014-03-03 19:14:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 19640; Favourites: 189; Downloads: 82
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Hi all here is first page of my new comic and also its my dream that i had last time so well here will be show how all did beginText fixed by
here is story of this comic world tomek1000.deviantart.com/journ…
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"on both i just din't have so easy to write in english".
It's okay if it's hard to type or write in english. It's like me trying to type Japanese.
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Have you ever heard of the term astral projection?
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Well if you haven't Googled it by now. What it is that some people believe that it is the ability to let your spirit leave their body and travel to a plain of existence call the astral plain. Or another world where spirits live and stuff. It's pretty interesting if your into spirits and psychics and stuff.
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A lot is two words
A story I started once started on a beach too. It was similar... they actually died in the real world and woke up on a beach and thought it was a dream... and then remember they died. story progresses, magic, missions, etc. And, to boot, it was based off a dream I had.
I just thought it was funny/neat that both ideas started with waking up on the beach.
Nice work!
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i'm a bit lazzy to explain all how he get there and 2 that place is not earth
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mine wasn't earth either, just a beach... somewhere
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Sądzę że mimo średnio zaawansowanej gramatyki zastosowanej w wstępie sam pomysł się liczy gdyż zrodził on bardzo ciekawą historyjkę.
Bariery językowe i tak nie powinny być uznawane jako coś nie do obejścia...
A sam komiks także mi się podoba.
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dziękuje a to dopiero początek opowieści
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Nie spodziewałem się jakiejkolwiek odpowiedzi a co dopiero tak szybkiej!
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cóż zazwyczaj od razu odpisuje
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To dobra cecha, a niestety nie każdy ją posiada. :/
Um... Nie ważne i tak.
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normaly I just fix the gramer and update it
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its not so easy i would had to delete not only text but also part of art where this text is
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That stone remind me totally on the dragon egg from Eragon!
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Even when you said your grammar was bad I found your intro to be very interesting. Great Job!
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ye all say me about this grama ...
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The drawings part of the comic iss really great, it's too early to say anything about the story... and you should do a spelling and punctuation check.
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i know my grama suck but i cant every time ask someone for remake my texts
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finally, tomek is drawing a comek, i am curious how it will go on
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ye and next page is already done
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nie chciało mi się bawić w bzdety takie jak rysowanie miasta i to jak gada z ludźmi i takie tam
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You might want to get someone to proofread your text first.
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Wow you started this comic off strong.
Pretty nice visuals!
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Thanks but this comiac dont look good espesly when you look at my other arts
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What do you mean? It's good because it's different
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i just failed art it look bad
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It is not a fail. It's way better than my art for sure and I'd do anything to have your art skills
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Oh looks good can't wait to see the next one
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Looks really nice so far! Excited for the next page!
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it can take some time before i end next page page
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That's okay! I will be looking forward to it! I also have a question, is this the story of how you got turned into Tomek the dragon? Or is it something else?
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that and much more it will got a lot of chapters
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Yeah first page!! This is gonna be awesome! It's great to see how everything started.
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Thank you page 2 as already done but i start it from begining
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