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Published: 2014-04-15 19:06:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 15724; Favourites: 145; Downloads: 32
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Finaly page for of my comic sorry still not good gramma coz well no one was online at moment i was writing text and i realy couldynt wait wanted it submit it alreadyas you can see i finaly will get anserws or maybe not? the true is behind this portal. ps i know efect of portal and light are not best i dont have good idea for it
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hehe ^^ its hard to draw good looking one ^^"
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aperture science wearable portal device?Β Β
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hehe a bit its hard to be orginal with this portals
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dude I said it before and i'll say it again wonderful art terrible spelling.
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I was born and raised in America and have known English my entire life. YOU GOT NOTHING ON ME. I think it's grammar you meant to say.
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funny coz now text is remade by someone who know it so well say that to
but i think she did great job
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well glad to know you've got somebody to help you out in that regard but you should still work on your skill in spelling online you art and comics are wonderful but you're ability to writ is something of a travesty.
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please do continue with you're story and I think that the best way for you're protagonist to advance is to get him to somebody who can tell him about the power he's just obtained and howΒ it's altered his destiny in addition to giving him a few lesson's on how to use that power effectively.
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well that was my plan
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so the story's moving on then right?
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damn dude this is good you should continue it
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Thanks but i need think at it
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your welcome hope you continue
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cool so when's the next one.Β not that i want to rush you. just anticipating the next page in the story.
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i dont know yet if there will be next page
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I just can't wait till the very next issue of you're comic series. so what the ETA till then? P.S. please take my advice about practicing and working on you're grammar.
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i dont know if i will continue this comic
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please don't give up on man for I find the story to really, really, really, really wonderful and awesome. so give it shot one more time and if that shot doesn't work out for you then that is when you should potential quit okay? well I wish you good luck.
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I dont know why you worried XD
you're writing was great here^^ much better then usuall
and the drawing as well as especially the lighing on your face when the gem glows or the portal glows^^
just awesome XD
did you get lessons from Flay on lighting/shading? XD
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ps text was fixed by someone and well about shading its more from deathtail, ryusuta and flay i mixed they styles together
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ahh XD ok
*nods* mixing your own styles XD that's always good^^
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I was thinking... why not release Polish version of the page as well? That way you can entertain people that speak EITHER language!
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i was thinking at it but i'm not sure
at moment i got no motivation to do that
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I think it would be amazing.
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we will see maybe i just will start translate from new chapter
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Cool, just remaans adding GladOS saying "lets do some tests" XD
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well at moment we can say end of comic i got no motivation to continue it
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OH MY GOD, that's a load of detail right there.
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thank you atlast visual part of it is good
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By the way, I've been thinking about doing an audiotape for this story. (It's just an idea, what do you think?)
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ye i was thinking about animated prologe of story but my skills are low in this way
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it can take time before i do next page
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