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Published: 2014-04-15 19:06:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 15724; Favourites: 145; Downloads: 32
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Finaly page for of my comic sorry still not good gramma coz well no one was online at moment i was writing text and i realy couldynt wait wanted it submit it alreadyas you can see i finaly will get anserws or maybe not? the true is behind this portal. ps i know efect of portal and light are not best i dont have good idea for it
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Tomek1000 In reply to ??? [2014-04-16 20:44:00 +0000 UTC]
ok i think i will fix text when i will got able it for all 4 pages
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mudalaca00 In reply to Tomek1000 [2014-04-16 09:38:02 +0000 UTC]
you said i live only 1 time i say yolo :3 (you only live once)
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Scadrafein In reply to ??? [2014-04-15 19:38:35 +0000 UTC]
Awesome looking comic! Good general idea too, and the English is understandable at the very least (I've seen a lot worse from native English speakers) ^ ^
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Tomek1000 In reply to Scadrafein [2014-04-16 07:28:50 +0000 UTC]
eh undersandable but destroy fun of comic
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Scadrafein In reply to Tomek1000 [2014-04-16 14:09:00 +0000 UTC]
Maybe. If it really bothers you, you can always practice English! Reading books, and even reading text in general might help. There are probably also guides out there to help with sentence structure and spelling too. In any case, the artwork on the comic still is great
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CelestialRainicorn In reply to ??? [2014-04-15 19:25:11 +0000 UTC]
This reminds me of the game Portal.
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Tomek1000 In reply to CelestialRainicorn [2014-04-16 07:29:26 +0000 UTC]
well in that game you create 2 portals to move from place to place on short distance
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GoldenCharmander888 In reply to CelestialRainicorn [2014-04-15 19:47:17 +0000 UTC]
This was a triumph
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spectator1234 In reply to Tomek1000 [2014-04-16 16:04:48 +0000 UTC]
You Only Live Once!
YOLO!
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corbynprower In reply to ??? [2014-04-15 19:19:33 +0000 UTC]
: o i wonder where it will take you
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Tomek1000 In reply to corbynprower [2014-04-16 07:29:48 +0000 UTC]
well at moment i dont plan make next page
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Tomek1000 In reply to saim-kurom [2014-04-16 07:30:02 +0000 UTC]
i dont know if that was bad wish
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