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Tomek1000 — Guardians of dimensions page 4
Published: 2014-04-15 19:06:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 15727; Favourites: 145; Downloads: 32
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Finaly page for of my comic sorry still not good gramma coz well no one was online at moment i was writing text and i realy couldynt wait wanted it submit it alreadyas you can see i finaly will get anserws or maybe not? the true is behind this portal. ps i know efect of portal and light are not best i dont have good idea for it
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pwease? QwQ *holds otu arms*
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Don't worry I can understand it. Nice job!
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eh still better if my grammar would not be so bad
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lol Americans face the same thing. As long as you don't talk like "c u 2 night" your ahead of the game.
I personally find the grammar in German much harder. Which I am trying to learn.
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Loving this!!! I always love the detail you have in the eyes
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I think having an actual translator would help...
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its not so easy i put my text into translator but well it even more destroy that text
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Text translators are not good at this sort of thing, Tomek. You need to actually do the translation on your own to make it work.
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eh my english not so good
start thinking there is no reason to continue this comic
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hey tomek, this comic is awesome, you should keep it up
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look i like your comics translation or not, you are a great artist and a great storyteller. I think you should continue but you should do what you want to do, regardless you will always have my support
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sorry i just dont know what to do
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Get someone to help you, of course.
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i did try when i did need them funny all was afk or offline
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Maybe you should plan the scripts ahead of time.
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hmm its hard when i got idea for page i just do it dont think too much
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I've offered to help him, but he hasn't told me to correct it ever...
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I still love this! You need to find some more spell-checkers if they aren't online enough. Anyway, love the detail and the expressions! Keep on working on this!
(I'm willing to help, and I check my DA usually every 30 minutes.)
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eh i would need fix text for all pages
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I'll see what I can do.
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Just pull the yolo and go through the portal.
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DUN DUN DUN!! A portal, that's so cool, can't wait for the next page to see where it takes him!
I think that this portal looks great, those light effect in this page are very well done.
BTW If you need help with the grammar, note me, I spend a lot of time in DA and I would love to help you with this comic.
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eh unlucky at that time when i do my comic you sleep
eh i will need delete this pages with that fail grammar
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We both live in europe, and in the same timezone. You mean that you make this comic in the night?
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But remember, if you need some help with that, I'll be dellighted to help.
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dude i would need resubmit all bages coz they are fail with that texts or maybe i will just delete that comic
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Why would you delete it?
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coz when people see my grammar they dont want take commisions
and well propobly they right
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Come on, people aren't that scrupulous. Plus, your english has been getting better with the time.
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ye but geting info every time next page about my grammar is not realy nice
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Just ignore them, they're grammar nazis. 
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but you know how it hurt espelsy when i put so much work in comic?
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Yeah, I know that feeling when you put a lot of hard work into something anf then people start to critize it.
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Wow! amazing.
I really like how dynamic the poses and expressions are XD
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It's so cute! Bad English is adorable! (No Offense)
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well i would like dont have bad english
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Aw, it's okay mate. I could help ya out.
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i dont know if you would got time to fox grammar form all text of all 4 pages
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I can help, it will take time though. I might send you a note for page 1-4 with fixed grammar.
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Okay, TO WORK. Also, if you have any questions about English, you can ask me for help.
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ok well at moment i will be afk coz i want work on commision
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Alright, I sent the first note and I'm sending the second one. You can fix the comic when you have time.
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