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Published: 2014-03-27 23:32:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 19417; Favourites: 222; Downloads: 42
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yep a next page of comic did go a bit solower coz im losing my motivation nvm i was playinghere with shading and bg wanted make it look betteranyway now all did explain about amulet on my next
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*Turns into a Dragon*
1 Second later
βok, I am not dreamingβ
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Nice Job, I like your story so far. I am working on a story of my own, with a dragon as a main character. As a long term goal, I would like it to be a book someday. To share it with others!
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just like me during a 'allgodsit'sgoingtochokeme' panic attack. i have a bad fear of being choked and plan to make a joke about in a book i'm writing.
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ye XD all say me that
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Am rather hoping this gets continued... A lot. It'd be great for this to be turned into a full scale story of some epic proportions. I'd certainly read it... You could benefit from a pre-reader, but it's promising stuff nonetheless!
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thank XD (should say my face XD)
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well a few grammar errors aside youΒ you're story's coming along just fine. so keep up the great work.
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ye i know about grammar
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don't you have spello check or something to correct you're mistakes?
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not realy and google dont work too good for it
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dude I can only say this about some you're spelling either get spell check or get you're self a an intensive course in online typing.
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well you could eventual give you're protagonist the ability to shapeshift between his human and dragon form in addition to a wide variety of other forms (depending upon the situation) at will in addition to develop sharper senses like his sight, smell, and hearing becoming very, very sharp. what do you think although here's an idea to consider maybe our hero being greet by somebody who can shed some light onto his current predicament as why he went from being human to turning into a dragon in addition as why he has a new set of bling wrapped around his neck.
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this all will explain in next pages that was part of my plan also i will show 1 of this gem abilitys in page 4
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dude you artwork is great but you're spelling not so much.
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well some of it was but you're grammar in general needs some work is all for your art comic drawing are more or less perfect the grammar is where you should divert some if not allΒ of you're attention on perfecting. that is my personal opinion on the matter. well I wish you good luck in that venture.
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aww man, you have got to teach me how to draw a dragon O_o
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i will try i will need someone who will teach me how to draw pokemons XD
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I could teach you how to draw a few, but I bet Drake could help with that too
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drake well he got his own style i look something other like becca do or chrome
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Alright, let me know when (or if) I can help you and when (or if) you can help me
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Thanks for creating the next scene. GOOD LUCK!!
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that 2nd last panel. xD that face is just funny to me xD
also not being offensing or anything. maybe you could have someone that could help you with the english? like a friend or someone you know thats good at english. im just saying thats all you dont have to do this its optional ^^
also one question: will you bring like other's characters(like Ryu or flay and so on) or i guess make your own characters into this story of yours?
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afraid Ryusuta would not like to be in comic she just dont like put her character into comics
and about flay i would need to ask him
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ahhh alright. any others you plan to be put into the comic?
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Great shading and depth effects here. I'd say this is a definite improvement if you're going for that realistic look so keep it up!
Also I'd be pretty horridied too if the ting that randomly transformed me suddenly grew a choker around my neck 
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Nice dude
Gen: (look at the red dragon) what are you doing?
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Thanks ^^
ps would be hard get show there this dimension got no living creatures its big sea with not many islands that are without trees or other things just sand
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The brotherhood already master technology to trave to other dimension
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i would not do that
ps there are dimensions inside of dimensions
like mirror dimensions of other one
and big dimensions that got inside that mirror one
guardians of dimensions got rules we dont engage normal into mirror dimension travels but if someone try travel to this biger dimensions and any other
then we must stop him usualy it end close in crystal prison or kill him we cant alow for that they will open portal to demons dimenison and allow them destroy everything
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Brotherhood is very advanced my friend we find a way to go there and way to just be there they brotherhood find away to keep anything away form are ships we had this tech before I meet you
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