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She walked to her death understanding,that from there no one returns.
She walked to her death and could not hear,
there was someone still calling her.
She told him, "Go! Run away!
Don't look back anymore!"
She said, "Forget about me!"
And fell into the black.
She leaped to her death as if she was in a dream,
from which she would never wake up.
She leaped to her death and right there and then,
she faded away more and more.
Life in exchange for life, no regrets,
the hole in her heart saved a twin.
The murderer's eyes stared at her,
asking her "Why all of a sudden?"
She fell into her death for the sake of love,
and you cannot forget love.
She fell into her death and thought to herself,
this if fate, no more running away.
No one will cry about her,
and no one will mourn.
And so her body, tired, somber, hurting,
falls into the abyss.
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He walked to his death with no fear,
he leaped to his death with real confidence,
he fell into his death and in his heart acknowledging,
that he did the right thing.
He walked to his death and a smile on his face,
he leaped to his death and a sparkle in his eyes,
he fell into his death and voices in his ears,
telling him this is the last day.
He sacrificed his life, saving another life,
he was lost, all alone, with no relatives and friends,
he left behind all of the things,
which made him laugh and cry.
He died a short death, with no pain,
he could not feel how his heart stopped beating,
he only cried about the loving brother,
who mourned his death screaming.
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Four they were, falling into the black,
and as four they saw a light at the end of the tunnel.
A woman, and a woman, and a woman, and a man,
lived life of misery, and were thrown into the grave.
And after death, a sudden birth came.
A fresh world popped up and appeared.
Into a whole new life they woke up from the netherworld,
having a second chance to begin everything all over again.
And in this new life, in this second chance,
they formed a relationship never created before.
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Comments: 4
GNneko [2011-07-27 14:43:19 +0000 UTC]
I like it more in english, but I don't think the translation is as clear as the hebrew one... I think you should check it out.
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tomisyaolang In reply to GNneko [2011-07-27 18:29:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the review ^^ I'll check the translation now again. You know how much I suck at English so there would probably be any mistakes XD
...HOLY DUCK! That's my ducking first draft!!! O///O How come I've posted THAT!?
Ghaaa!!! thank you for showing me. It's so ducking embarrasing!!! O///O
I'll update the original document and post the final draft... oops ><
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GNneko In reply to tomisyaolang [2011-07-27 19:14:36 +0000 UTC]
lol good thing I'm here huh? XD
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tomisyaolang In reply to GNneko [2011-08-12 05:45:49 +0000 UTC]
Yep. And thank you so much XP Now updated!
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