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Published: 2010-06-08 15:35:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 44391; Favourites: 1335; Downloads: 1164
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Another CG of the old Visual Novel I worked on. The guy (main character) came to the girl's locker to return the notebook she had dropped but he didn't expect the girl to be in there changing.Characters by me, background by partner bg artist. He doesn't have a DA account so I can't credit him here.
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Yeaa.
I think this is Hideyoshi something? rofl.
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Oh yea her.
I fell in love when i first saw her.
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that one's a manly hideyoshi.
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looks really good man, i like a picture that tells a story rather than the (and im guilty of it) standard character in a pose with any old generic background.
youve both done really well with both the lineart and the colouring. very smooth blends but not an overdose of detail, but enough to make the image visually appealing without overcomplicating.
i like the touches in the background, as in the photo and the schedule, helps solidify the story being told.
my only objection, and i mean my ONLY objection, is the light reflected in the girls hair, just seems off, i dont think the streak looks right, maybe if it was jagged a bit to help give texture to her hair, or maybe its the curve, im not sure exactly, you could try a few things out perhaps but it doesnt destroy the picture so you could leave it as is and still have a fantastic piece of artwork.
last note, i love the pose shes in, it seems like such a natural reaction to whats happening, the angered look but with the hand against the locker still showing signs of the initial suprise, very well put together.
well thats it from me. +devwatch
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Niiice
Could've guessed the events just by looking at the pic
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