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yourmomsaname [2010-08-20 00:15:01 +0000 UTC]

Toni Toni Toni.... XD

These all look wonderful! So here's some tips:

#1 FLUBBER LEGS, okay, not really, but the leg that is bent wouldn't curve like that. XD It makes her leg look like a noodle and muscle-less, not to mention that the bent-leg's thigh is longer than the other. For that one you would shorten up the length of the thigh and bend the leg further out. (Think of the pose Sailor Jupiter does after she transforms XD) and you would also define that the foot is bending, cause otherwise she's on her tip-toes and I imagine that isn't very pleasant. XD

#7 + 8 - Although she's wearing a leotard, it won't hurt to just show the slight lines of the buttcheeks (i know you're laughing, stfu. XD) otherwise it looks like she has a huge bubble butt or something padded that shouldn't be there. XD For those it would be similar to what you did on #5 XD

Also, make sure you keep things consistent, like the ankle width. XD

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IndigoSunbeam [2010-08-19 15:05:16 +0000 UTC]

I see an improvement from the last set, honestly I am no good at critques [especially when I fail at drawing legs myself. ;-; ], the knees on two seem a little boney in my opinion,and 4 and 7 seems a little thin, not to mention 7's legs seem a bit stiff. Over all though, as said, better than the last set I looked at. There is more movement and they are shaped better.

This is hard without the rest of the body

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