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Now, what should I say?.... Oh, yes. *clears throat*
I can definitely say that you have some creativity with your dialogue. You can clearly get a grip of what each character might say.
However, one thing that I don't really like about this (and others) is that some of the lines get really drawn out. What I mean by that is some of them are too long. Take, for example, Zuko's line when he says "You wield fire, but you are no Fire Bender." If this were to be an actual MKX intro, it would be too long. It might have been better if it was shortened down to "You are no Fire Bender."
But, other than that, this is definitely a well thought-out interaction idea. Keep it up!
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Thank you, your complements and your criticisms really help.
Y'know I do get that a lot with the drawn out thing. I often think of that myself when making them, the problem is I feel like I need to specify certain things for the back and forth to make sense. I often come up with these quotes in opposites order, and then I gotta come up with what Zuko would say to make Liu say what he said. Long story short, I overthink the shit out of these quotes XD which results in them being a little longer.
Btw did you see my Zuko vs sub zero one?
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Now that's understandable; overthinking is overdoing.
I have seen it. Still pretty good.
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