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Sparkleswords [2016-04-25 01:50:39 +0000 UTC]

Hello from #projectcomment !

This is a neat concept, and I really like the swirly colors in the center. I think it's neat that you used the primary colors, since all other colors can be made from those three. The detail on the hands is also pretty impressive. I like the rough shading...I think it helps contribute to the overall impression of creating something new.

I think that this piece might be improved if the light source was more obviously the color-ball. Right now, it looks like the light is coming from somewhere in front of everything. 

Keep up the good work!

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therogueone [2016-04-23 23:10:20 +0000 UTC]

What a meaningful concept for a piece. Really touching, especially here in an art community. Those hands are amazing! So well drawn and shaded/highlighted. Great detail, and I love the softness of the way you used black on the hands. The colors used for the world coming into creation are beautiful. Nice decision to keep them analogous. I see that you kept the world small in size as it's just coming into being, but my eye craves a bit more of those lovely colors in the creator's hands. Also, my interpretation is that the top of the piece is so much black to represent the void, but if that is a correct reading of the work, I think I'd like to see the void look a bit more intentional on your part, distinguish it somehow (which I know is a challenge because it's a void LOL). Really powerful drawing and significant in particular for dA.  

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TearsofTurquoise [2016-04-21 23:43:19 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I'm here with !
I like the way you did the shading and middle burst of colours in this piece! However, I do have a few suggestions for improvement. It may be the photo's graininess, but I think it is your colouring of the picture. The way you coloured it in makes it look a little too grainy for my taste, perhaps blending the colours with an alcohol marker or using a smoother, less textured paper would have helped to reduce that effect. The proportions/anatomy is pretty spot on with this piece, but once thing I would fix would be to bring in the bottom joint of the thumb just a tad, as it protrudes a little more than looks natural. Other than those suggestions, I do like this piece because of the vision and message! 

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AmbergrisElement [2016-04-20 17:52:18 +0000 UTC]

Diese Pose und das Leuchtenden in den Händen hat etwas Mysteriöses und Magisches an sich,sehr schöne Arbeit!

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The-Rosalina-Guru [2016-04-20 15:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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sherlock3355 [2016-04-20 11:40:47 +0000 UTC]

I like the contrast and the details here. Good work!

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ChiharusMoon [2016-04-20 01:59:18 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful the details are exquisite magnificent piece!! ^^

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