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Published: 2005-12-31 16:54:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 273; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 7
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Another variation, playing around with my Last Unicorn sketch.The part of the transformation scene that always stuck with me was the loss the unicorn felt...
EDIT: Took some very helpful advice, and I think I am happier with it this way.
Still not sure about the composition, but I think I'll let it sit for a while, 'cause I can't look at it anymore right now. ^^
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I've been searching for a picture that captures the Unicorn mid-transformation, physically and emotionally. Yours is lovely. It conveys that sense of wrongness that the Unicorn feels coming into her human body, and the loss.
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Good work. One of my favorites.
Constructive Critisism:
I would make the unicorns horn darker. If you can add some texture and color to the piece.
I would also change the composition of the piece. It's a blan composition and if it was offcentered in some way it should become more interesting.
A concrete example: I recently did a piece with a full moon in it called "The Blue Moon". When I shifted the moon to the left of my composition it turned out much better.
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Thank you for the constructive criticism! You can never have too much of that helpful stuff.
The only thing I hesitate on is the darkening of the horn. The picture is of/was inspired by the scene in The Last Unicorn where the unicorn is transformed into a human girl to save her life...I wanted to convey a sense of the horn fading out or disapearing, since she is losing it. I will definitely play around with the texture and color of the piece, though, as well as the composition. Now that I look at the piece again, I do see things I'd like to tweak.
Thanks so much for your input, and I'm glad you liked it!
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