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idea for manga project with Guardianslant[link]Related content
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Ebonsong [2013-06-09 18:19:34 +0000 UTC]
I like that you've used less hard lines here overall - to feature the more important stuff. With more fleshed-out backgrounds you'll want to have weaker/fuzzy lines for distant things & harder/sharper for the foreground (and/or your focus). Of course there's always exceptions.^^
As for the story within the sketch, I like it! To me, it looks like it would normally be a busy alley or street but is somewhat abandoned right now save for that one person walking forward/away (unless it's an object, I'm not sure). I'm also not sure what that object is under the window in the foreground. Could be a sign, stain, or tossed laundry. Hmm.
The heavy clouds make me think there's a lot of movement up there. Maybe it rained recently, or is about to thunderstorm. I like that, you have a nice mood for the sky, which matches the street well.
I'm curious what that spike is in the far background. It could be made of earth, or man-made, maybe even a spiky castle. Whatever it is, I can tell it's important & seems to affect the lives of the people there. However that may be!
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toshi13go In reply to Ebonsong [2013-06-11 01:27:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for the feedback!
Actually I`m not too sure what it is either
Thanks!
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Ebonsong In reply to toshi13go [2013-06-11 17:23:14 +0000 UTC]
Hehe. Seems like we're discovering it together!
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toshi13go In reply to GuardianSlant [2013-06-07 01:42:38 +0000 UTC]
yep the rebuilt city. I`ve been trying to think how to draw the modern city but its kinda of hard. I`ll try to post these kinda sketches more frequently maybe once a day if possible.
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GuardianSlant In reply to toshi13go [2013-06-07 02:34:12 +0000 UTC]
ok, If you're not able to post super frequently, don't worry about it. Also remember to incorporate an "ultra modern" style to the modern city. Googles got plenty of pictures lol.
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toshi13go In reply to GuardianSlant [2013-06-07 02:52:31 +0000 UTC]
okay, thanks but I think I gotta hurry it up a little bit. cause if I continue at this pace it will literally take years I`ve been looking at google for reference but, yeah, well I`ll figure something out
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