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Published: 2012-08-23 00:52:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 759; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 4
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Description (A StargateAtlantis Wraith-based Fanfic)

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There was a young Wraith from Pegasus
Whose assets were really quite megasus.
His body was fine,
His lips were divine
And he truly had more than most of us.

This particular Wraith's name was Owarell.
When put to the test, you sure could tell
He was loyal and kind,
With an enquiring mind
And he proved to be true of heart as well.

Now our young Wraith was a dreamer,
A lover, a rake and a schemer.
He wanted to find
A Queen, one of a kind-
To court, woo, win and redeem her.

Owarell travelled all through the galaxy
'till he thought his quest was a fallacy.
He looked far and wide
In vain for his bride.
Obsession soon turned into malady.

Owarell hung his young head in despair
And cried out, "Is no Queen out there?
I only need one
That special someone
Whom I could worship, adore and take care."

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There was a young woman from Earth
Who always was sure of her worth.
By Wraith she was taken,
Far from her home nation
When food for the Wraith was in dearth.

Our captured young lass was called Incy;
whose own charms were also not wincy.
She was fair of face;
Her limbs, they had grace
And her talents were certainly not teensy.

A Wraithlord made Incy his slave,
Though she always tried hard to be brave.
She had to please him,
Serve, obey and tease him,
Determined her own skin to save.

Her Wraithlord Incy managed to impress,
With her beauty, her skill and her dress.
He took extra care,
Hid Incy in his lair
So her true worth no others could guess.

The Wraithlord, he then decided to splice
Incy's genome into something real nice.
Half Human, half Wraith,
And all full of faith.
She had the best of each race in a trice.

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One day Owarell met Incy's cruel captor,
Whose mean face looked a bit like a raptor.
One time, on a call
Owarell saw past a wall
And glimpsed Incy's face through a trapdoor.

Owarell's heart leapt and increased its beating.
This really was a most fortunate meeting!
The girl he had seen
Must become his Queen.
He would give her his heart as a greeting.

Owarell challenged the Wraithlord to fight.
Determined to use his wits and his might
To duel and to beat him,
To best and defeat him
And make Incy his own Queen by right.

The battle, it truly did rage.
To describe it would take more than a page.
Let us just say-
Owarell won the day,
Fuelled by his great love for his mage.

Now Incy took Owarell's measure-
Found here was a man she could treasure.
Strong, brave and kind-
She made up her mind.
To mate with him would be a pleasure!

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This is the story of how Incy and Owarell met.
Their love survives to this day, you can bet!
Incy became Queen,
The best Pegasus has seen
and Owarell worships her yet.

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Comments: 23

AkkrinWraith [2013-06-22 22:31:29 +0000 UTC]

I can't believe it's taken me so long to get this read, but I'm glad I finally did!

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toska9 In reply to AkkrinWraith [2013-06-24 00:56:32 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had fun writing it, it wasn't as easy as it seems!
I have not had time to write anything new for quite a while though, sigh!

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VelvetKevorkian333 [2012-08-24 14:17:03 +0000 UTC]

It's brilliant! I love it!

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toska9 In reply to VelvetKevorkian333 [2012-08-26 00:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you!
*tries to look modest, but fails miserable and manages to blush with pleasure instead....*

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Hellraiser-89 [2012-08-23 18:27:30 +0000 UTC]

Nice work!

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toska9 In reply to Hellraiser-89 [2012-08-24 05:19:21 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you!

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Lady-Izayoi [2012-08-23 14:42:46 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful..Awesome..AMAZING. I just LOVE how you did it all in Rhyme

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toska9 In reply to Lady-Izayoi [2012-08-24 05:20:25 +0000 UTC]

I tell you, it nearly was the death of me....some of the words were not easy to rhyme with!!!
Thanks for the kind comments.

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Lady-Izayoi In reply to toska9 [2012-08-24 14:28:22 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha..I can imagine.
But it turned out wonderful

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IRideAMagicalLadle [2012-08-23 13:59:10 +0000 UTC]

oh my gosh! AND THIS LADYS AND GENTS, IS HOW IT SHOULD BE!!

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toska9 In reply to IRideAMagicalLadle [2012-08-24 05:21:11 +0000 UTC]


Thank you for the kind words, I was very nervous with this one!
Both a contest prize, and working with someone else's characters....

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IRideAMagicalLadle In reply to toska9 [2012-08-24 14:35:20 +0000 UTC]

I know the feeling (sort of..), you did very well

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AdaDirenni [2012-08-23 10:30:01 +0000 UTC]

aww! You're an amazing writer! You captured Owarell's personality so well. Very sweet!

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toska9 In reply to AdaDirenni [2012-08-24 05:21:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.
I'm glad people seem to like it, I wanted to do Incy's creations justice!

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saracaindica [2012-08-23 08:35:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh great poem

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toska9 In reply to saracaindica [2012-08-24 05:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you!
I have not tried a limerick before (not since my school days, anyways.....)

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saracaindica In reply to toska9 [2012-08-24 07:13:27 +0000 UTC]

YouΒ΄re much welcome.
Oh but itΒ΄s great.

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Vala70 [2012-08-23 05:24:17 +0000 UTC]

Il est difficile de donner un avis sur un texte, qui est Γ©crit dans une langue qu'on ne connait pas, mais avec ce texte je comprends mieux l'histoire d'Owarell et d'Incy. J'ai lu la fic qui parle d'eux mais c'est parfois difficile de tout comprendre. Merci je suis certaine que le style est bon.

It is difficult to give an opinion on a text that is written in a language we do not know, but I understand this text better story Owarell and Incy. I read the fic that talks about them but it is sometimes difficult to understand everything. Thank you I'm sure the style is good.

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toska9 In reply to Vala70 [2012-08-24 05:25:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Vala, I appreciate that you try to read a language that is not your own.
We in the English-speaking world sometimes forget that not everyone automatically speaks English....thanks also for your nice comment!

Google translator:

Merci Vala, je comprends que vous essayez de lire une langue qui n'est pas la vΓ΄tre.
Nous, dans le monde anglo-saxon oublie parfois que tout le monde ne parle anglais .... automatiquement remercie Γ©galement pour votre gentil commentaire!

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IncyVortex [2012-08-23 03:27:57 +0000 UTC]

lol, it is so cute and fun You did a great job and did them justice

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toska9 In reply to IncyVortex [2012-08-24 05:25:24 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it, Incy!
I really did want you to be happy!!

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IncyVortex In reply to toska9 [2012-08-24 07:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Incy is happy lol

*sigh* now if I could get rid of this overbearing cat... then the Incy would be even happier

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d4174179 [2012-08-23 02:04:31 +0000 UTC]

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toska9 In reply to d4174179 [2012-08-24 05:26:14 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you *tries to bow graciously, falls over and splits pants....*

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