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Page 1. C= Finished it just now. So the story begins!
READ DOWN! (The paper was folded in half, (hot dog style))
I deiced to use a more western-drawing style for this since it's actually easier and much faster to draw these pages out. I feel that an anime style would kinda take long since it was much more detail, but that's just my opinion.
It's obvious from this page that I suck so bad at backgrounds. I did a messy job coloring them too.
Once again, I'm sorry if the writing came out small. The good news is, I finally figured out how to make chat bubbles, so they'll look better on the next page.
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Comments: 33
Amulet-Voltaire [2013-07-15 02:19:44 +0000 UTC]
If that was me, I'd probably be screaming stranger danger every time I saw 'mom' x3
Now... read ALL the nuzlockes!
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TotoRee12 In reply to Amulet-Voltaire [2013-07-18 01:00:33 +0000 UTC]
Aw X'D
And thanks, I think. XD
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Silvazelover105 [2013-02-26 03:40:47 +0000 UTC]
Wow, her brain was transferred into the head of an armature teen trainer within a decade old game XD, I'd hate to end up like that, waaay too many strangers.
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TotoRee12 In reply to Silvazelover105 [2013-03-10 20:57:00 +0000 UTC]
Yup! Looks like she'll have to adjust to it for now.
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Octoboy-the-8th [2012-10-03 07:13:30 +0000 UTC]
Does it seem creepy to anyone else that the mum's speech bubbles always end in a heart or three? Kind of eerie.
"Map, yo" eh? That seems kind of significant.
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TotoRee12 In reply to Octoboy-the-8th [2012-10-05 06:01:19 +0000 UTC]
I think you're the only one to have pointed that out. XD
Lol, the "map yo" was just me being lazy.
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IceHeartTheWarrior [2012-08-28 20:38:38 +0000 UTC]
I like how our main characters' moms are comPLETELY different!
Yours is nice and sweet
Mine is cigarette addict and is a total bitch
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TotoRee12 In reply to IceHeartTheWarrior [2012-08-28 21:45:12 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, your main character's mom doesn't sound very nice. xD
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IceHeartTheWarrior In reply to TotoRee12 [2012-08-28 21:50:51 +0000 UTC]
first page she's all like, "We're here Sapphire... NOW GET THE @#&! OUT!" Then she slams the door in my face
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TotoRee12 In reply to IceHeartTheWarrior [2012-08-28 22:08:33 +0000 UTC]
That sounds terrible! I hope karma bites her mom in the butt. XD
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IceHeartTheWarrior In reply to TotoRee12 [2012-08-28 22:11:45 +0000 UTC]
Right? Maybe I'll have Chicky burn her with Ember XD
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TotoRee12 In reply to IceHeartTheWarrior [2012-08-28 22:19:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh, gosh, that'd be hilarious to see!
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carnax489 [2012-07-20 02:02:59 +0000 UTC]
awww, the confusion of what you're going through right now =/
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TotoRee12 In reply to EdyD [2012-05-28 20:41:43 +0000 UTC]
It can be very confusing. I doubt Briss accepts her as her mom. XD
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TotoRee12 In reply to graywolf009 [2012-03-06 03:27:07 +0000 UTC]
That's what happens when you get too lazy and try to avoid drawing an actual map, lol!
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CharizardKassie [2011-08-29 08:26:51 +0000 UTC]
OMG LOL Her face! Her face! When shes asking "Who are you?" LOLZ its hilarious! Still makes me laugh! >.< Oh and the ever so famous, "Map, yo!" Your so lazy But its funny!
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TotoRee12 In reply to CharizardKassie [2011-08-29 17:02:25 +0000 UTC]
Heeee. You know me! When I get lazy, I tend to find my way around things. XD And thank you!!
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ZephyrLightningheart [2011-08-25 20:15:38 +0000 UTC]
map yo! lol man that'll be funny is the mp from dora said that.
the panel where briss' face is bugge that her mom isnt her.
really nice! ill be reading more.
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TotoRee12 In reply to ZephyrLightningheart [2011-08-26 01:04:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Glad it made you laugh!
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Miscellaneously-Kina [2011-08-20 17:59:41 +0000 UTC]
LMFAO
Her face when she asks who her "mother" is killed me. Omg. so did "Map, yo"
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TotoRee12 In reply to Miscellaneously-Kina [2011-08-20 18:40:16 +0000 UTC]
Heeee. Glad it made you laugh a little. XD Thanks for the comment!!
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CrazedRevelation [2011-08-18 21:21:00 +0000 UTC]
Im liking this so far. Page 2 a got a good chuckle outta me. Keep going.
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