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It's done, it's done, it's done!!!

READ THIS NEXT PART AFTER READING THE COMIC!!

Ok, so many things to explain... where to start???

First off, the two new teammates! Amelia the Numel and (not officially part of the team yet) Kiki the Skarmory. This is actually the 2nd time I've done a nuzlocke on my brother's ruby version (I didn't take notes the first time and decided to re-do it OTL), so I was really excited when Kiki appeared on Route 113.

When I got to that route, I didn't immediately run into the grass. I was hoping to get something other than a Spinda, but then I thought, "Oh well. I'll just train a Spinda". When I ran into the grass, nothing was popping out so I got a little scared but then a Skarmory popped out and I just... I lost it. In the previous page, Briss said, "Let's go back to Mauville to buy more supplies." I bought 20+ pokeballs before leaving Mauville and I'm grateful I did. It took a LOT of tries to catch Kiki even after weakening her a bit.

A second thing I want to point out is something that pointed out already. Lately I've been struggling a little with the speech bubbles. I'm scared of making the text too small so I end up making it big, but big text=big speech bubbles. While I was working on this update, I noticed that some (probably most OTL) of the panels look... cluttered. I'll try to fix this problem in the next update, but if anyone has any trouble reading the text, let me know.

And lastly, the thing I always complain about, the backgrounds. Curse those things! I always struggle and try to get better at them, but then... ugh... I don't know what happens... In this update, it's easy to tell which backgrounds I actually tried and which I gave up on. I'm hoping to get better some day...

The other Kiki art I was talking about will be posted sometime tomorrow... but this one can be seen now!: [link]

I think that's all I wanted to say...

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Previous [link] // First [link] // Next [link]

It's done, it's done, it's done!!!

READ THIS NEXT PART AFTER READING THE COMIC!!

Ok, so many things to explain... where to start???

First off, the two new teammates! Amelia the Numel and (not officially part of the team yet) Kiki the Skarmory. This is actually the 2nd time I've done a nuzlocke on my brother's ruby version (I didn't take notes the first time and decided to re-do it OTL), so I was really excited when Kiki appeared on Route 113.

When I got to that route, I didn't immediately run into the grass. I was hoping to get something other than a Spinda, but then I thought, "Oh well. I'll just train a Spinda". When I ran into the grass, nothing was popping out so I got a little scared but then a Skarmory popped out and I just... I lost it. In the previous page, Briss said, "Let's go back to Mauville to buy more supplies." I bought 20+ pokeballs before leaving Mauville and I'm grateful I did. It took a LOT of tries to catch Kiki even after weakening her a bit.

A second thing I want to point out is something that pointed out already. Lately I've been struggling a little with the speech bubbles. I'm scared of making the text too small so I end up making it big, but big text=big speech bubbles. While I was working on this update, I noticed that some (probably most OTL) of the panels look... cluttered. I'll try to fix this problem in the next update, but if anyone has any trouble reading the text, let me know.

And lastly, the thing I always complain about, the backgrounds. Curse those things! I always struggle and try to get better at them, but then... ugh... I don't know what happens... In this update, it's easy to tell which backgrounds I actually tried and which I gave up on. I'm hoping to get better some day...

The other Kiki art I was talking about will be posted sometime tomorrow... but this one can be seen now!: [link]

I think that's all I wanted to say...