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touchofdestiny — 'I want to, I cannot'

Published: 2009-05-28 03:16:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1117; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Description THIS PICTURE IS A HUGE MAJOR SPOILER OF ONE OF MY CHARACTER'S STORIES.

"Why would he choose me? I do not want to be his mate!"
"Dearest Aiizelle, sweet little sister, you have no choice. No one does."
"Krushis does! He can choose not to desire me as he does."
"No, it is instinct. A naga cannot change who they believe is their mate."
"...but I will never love the child."
"You will."
"I would try, Rune. I would want to. But I know I cannot ever love the child of a man I do not love."
"That is why humans are looked down on. They trust their emotions, which are meaningless in the end. Remember, sister, you may look human, but you were raised naga."

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WHO'S THAT CHILD?

First person who guesses correctly gets a quick sketch of like, anything they want.
(You shouldn't have to guess, though, if you pay any attention to my art at all.)

If you can't read her expression, look more carefully. It's hard to tell unless you actually look.
She is NOT as happy as she appears.

And if you look, you'll notice that they're lying on the tail of the child's Father- Krushis.

And, when naga are first born, they have no markings on their tail. That's why myster child's is just that color.

All the characters; Rune, Aiizelle, Krushis, and MYSTERY CHILD, plus their story belong to ME- ~touchofdestiny
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Comments: 21

Pepperistia [2013-08-17 08:37:39 +0000 UTC]

Where can i read the story, it sounds epic  

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LovelyLadyGray [2009-07-11 05:36:16 +0000 UTC]

This actually inspired me to draw some Naga artwork. Haven't drawn any Naga/Nagi artwork in a while. Hope to read the story about them. Keep it up on your artwork.

Do not use the words: that, but, were, had, it, in, was, & here since it will KILL the flow of the story.
Remember to SHOW not tell the story.

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touchofdestiny In reply to LovelyLadyGray [2009-07-11 17:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Those are very hard words to ignore, since they're all very important to the English language...

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LovelyLadyGray In reply to touchofdestiny [2009-07-11 23:37:52 +0000 UTC]

It is quite hard to break out of it, and I have found
the story works out better without them...I'm getting better at not writing them.

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touchofdestiny In reply to LovelyLadyGray [2009-07-12 00:18:39 +0000 UTC]

I would find it extremely difficult to not have a character say "Here" when someone asks "Where"...

So um... I would still use it.

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LovelyLadyGray In reply to touchofdestiny [2009-07-12 17:00:17 +0000 UTC]

I know trying something new is always difficult to do.
Also I do use the word "Here" when another character
asks "Where is...?"

It's alright...I know what you mean.

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touchofdestiny In reply to LovelyLadyGray [2009-07-12 17:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Lol well thanks for the advice anyway =^^= And I'm glad I was able to inspire you~ I don't think I've ever been able to inspire anyone before

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LovelyLadyGray In reply to touchofdestiny [2009-07-13 17:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Okay you're very welcome for the advice. And it is good to know you're happy you inspired another artist. I think it is important to keep on helping & inspiring others.

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Atsuyojuunfuyumi [2009-05-29 14:43:38 +0000 UTC]

I hate being terrible with names, I know that kid. .-.

Awesome art, tho. I love Aiizelle's hair.

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touchofdestiny In reply to Atsuyojuunfuyumi [2009-05-29 14:46:27 +0000 UTC]

You should skitter around my gallery and see if you can't figure it out before someone else does.

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Atsuyojuunfuyumi In reply to touchofdestiny [2009-05-29 15:06:33 +0000 UTC]

I think its either Alex or Ronin. if not... i guess I'll look some more.

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touchofdestiny In reply to Atsuyojuunfuyumi [2009-05-29 15:10:43 +0000 UTC]

LOL, Ronin. That's funny :3

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Atsuyojuunfuyumi In reply to touchofdestiny [2009-05-29 15:11:30 +0000 UTC]

Its Alexander, the one in the picture with Alannen or something. >.< It has to be!

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touchofdestiny In reply to Atsuyojuunfuyumi [2009-05-29 15:12:46 +0000 UTC]

Well yeah it has to be =^^= Because it is <3

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Atsuyojuunfuyumi In reply to touchofdestiny [2009-05-29 15:13:37 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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touchofdestiny In reply to Atsuyojuunfuyumi [2009-05-29 15:14:58 +0000 UTC]

:3 Sketch of?

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Atsuyojuunfuyumi In reply to touchofdestiny [2009-05-29 15:17:19 +0000 UTC]

Jezebelle! You can't see Jezzy's eyes, they just glow lime green. Just so ya know. =3

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touchofdestiny In reply to Atsuyojuunfuyumi [2009-05-29 15:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Okaaay.

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Atsuyojuunfuyumi In reply to touchofdestiny [2009-05-29 15:37:33 +0000 UTC]

one mroe thing, you dont have to put all that detail into jezz's dress if you dont want to. Also, she's actually a very cheery vampire.

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NocturnalBirdie [2009-05-28 04:48:12 +0000 UTC]

I cant name the characters sadly but this looks really
interesting.....ur going to write out the story then? >_>

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touchofdestiny In reply to NocturnalBirdie [2009-05-28 15:45:40 +0000 UTC]

.....eventually >_>

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