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Немного травы от меняPS Some grass from me)
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PagesOfDreams [2010-03-04 22:05:03 +0000 UTC]
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This picture really caught my eye (No pun intended here, really). I really like the concept of this piece and there's something really interesting and powerful about it. One part that sticks out to me though that I think you might want to edit is the left hand between the thumb and index finger the white part of the eye looks a bit too white and looks like there's a bit of a bite out of the iris, unless that's intentional?
Either way, I really like how the hands are pulling out the iris, trying to remove it from the rest of the eyes and I like that it looks like the thumb on the right hand is sinking in to the pupil.
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KasiasDragon [2010-03-04 20:51:18 +0000 UTC]
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Hello, random deviant!
I noticed you put this up for critiquing, so I thought I would give it a go.e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="
" title="Bullet; Purple -
"/> I love the design that you have for this piece. It's very unique, simple and yet complex all at once. I love the surreal feeling that this piece portrays.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="
" title="Bullet; Purple -
"/> Another thing that I find very amazing is the anatomy. The hands are excellent, and the way the eye is slightly skewed feels natural considering the painful thing going on.
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" title="Bullet; Black -
"/> This piece is awesomely simple. There's not too much going on that it looks busy, but just enough to make it stand out. However, a little extra effort could have been put into it, just for the finishing touches.
Example being perhaps inking it, or at least cleaning up some stray lines to make it look slightly less messy.e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="
" title="Bullet; Red -
"/> This is my own personal preference, and you can take this part of the critique however you would like. Considering how painful what's going on would be, you might consider adding in some eye watering.
Overall, I love this piece. It's quite amazing, especially in the originality. I hope to see more people following in your footsteps and creating original artwork!
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BreakingOnion In reply to KasiasDragon [2010-03-04 22:27:57 +0000 UTC]
This is an amazing EYE-dea...I'm horrible. Gawd, kill me now. Everytime I look at this I'm thinking he's removing a computer disk...or it may LOOK like an eye but maybe it's something else. Or you can take it literally and think the guy is in horrible pain, like you said.
Good critique. Glad I read it, and I agree.
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LaughAddiction In reply to Toxandreev [2011-10-22 01:08:49 +0000 UTC]
how did you ever come up with a drawing like this?
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Toxandreev In reply to LaughAddiction [2011-11-11 12:17:35 +0000 UTC]
just have idea, just draw it )
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LaughAddiction In reply to Toxandreev [2011-11-12 04:19:48 +0000 UTC]
well, it's amazing just please, please, keep up the fabulous work!!!
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Belial-Anya [2011-09-16 15:41:40 +0000 UTC]
Потрясающая работа! Собирусь и тату себе такое сделаю!)
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Toxandreev In reply to Belial-Anya [2011-09-16 17:27:47 +0000 UTC]
нефига себе 00
на самом деле безумно приятно слышать)
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Belial-Anya In reply to Toxandreev [2011-09-17 08:14:07 +0000 UTC]
Просто работа и в правду потрясающая!
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Wildschwein [2011-07-14 19:26:06 +0000 UTC]
Безумно клёвная идея, отличное переложение!
Надеюсь, это приличное русское предложение.
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Toxandreev In reply to x-FiggY-DoggiE-x [2010-07-29 07:05:56 +0000 UTC]
Спасибо, рад что нравится)
старенький такой рисунок, но видать удачный, что его всё еще коментят и фавят ^^
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silverwing-sparrow [2010-04-19 02:17:16 +0000 UTC]
Ещё бы доработать в цвете и будет вообще шикарно
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Toxandreev In reply to silverwing-sparrow [2010-04-19 04:46:05 +0000 UTC]
даааа... в масле это было-бы крууто , но возможности нет >(
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silverwing-sparrow In reply to Toxandreev [2010-04-19 04:54:07 +0000 UTC]
Жаль. Ну может быть когда-нибудь...
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Toxandreev In reply to silverwing-sparrow [2010-04-19 05:49:28 +0000 UTC]
ооо даааа ~ когда-нибудь )
будет время, будет масло ~
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Leavatein12 [2010-04-15 17:50:30 +0000 UTC]
Супер классная идея,очуметь это так необычно и претягивающе
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Toxandreev In reply to Leavatein12 [2010-04-15 20:53:00 +0000 UTC]
Хах) спасибо. если долго пялить в экран так и будет Хх
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YouAreTheAwesomest [2010-04-15 03:18:43 +0000 UTC]
O I love the idea haha. only a genius would think of this! a true artist's work!!! ;D
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Toxandreev In reply to YouAreTheAwesomest [2010-04-15 06:31:28 +0000 UTC]
awwww)) thnk
i'm happy if you think so CCC=
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Glawar [2010-02-03 13:59:34 +0000 UTC]
М.. нра такие темы)
вообще концепты у тебя классные, цвета бы всему этому...
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Toxandreev In reply to Glawar [2010-02-03 16:09:47 +0000 UTC]
Мне очень приятны подобные комментарии такого замечательного художника)
ПС цвет пока моё больное место... я меньше месяца с планшетом... но всё поправится
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Glawar In reply to Toxandreev [2010-02-03 19:22:34 +0000 UTC]
За замечательного художника спасибо)
Да, месяц с планшеткой маловато.. но зато столько нового наверное сразу! Удач тебе больших с ним, жду прогресса и цвета)
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Toxandreev In reply to Glawar [2010-02-03 19:29:09 +0000 UTC]
Аха, удача мне точно понадобится XD
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Toxandreev In reply to RlySrh [2009-11-07 14:33:18 +0000 UTC]
Owww, thnx ^_^ i'm happy, that you like it
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