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Toxic-Mario — First in Line

Published: 2012-02-05 19:13:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 86232; Favourites: 1008; Downloads: 934
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Description Ok....I'll say this now.....people have been demanding I get the eyes finally in the MLP style. I got sooooo pissed off at some of you saying I couldn't do them. Well....anytime I get that....time to prove people wrong. Pinkie in the second to last panel....IDK why her eyes are off but oh well.


Anywho I finally got this out. This would have been out last week but I got soooo tied up in the collab comic with Tsitra360 that took 4 days. Forgive me if I withhold my apology cause that collab was awesome. But time to get back to my stuff.


Overall I'm pleased with the way this turned out. I took my time with this....I HATE doing sweet apple acres....all the trees...it's worse than Twilight's library.....ok maybe not. I find it amazing I do better at building settings now than outdoor setting. Anyway what you guys think of this comic? Like it? Comments and the occasion critique is helpful. I read them all remember.


Time spent: 20 hours over 4 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't COPY, trace, or recolor any of this WITHOUT asking us. Remember to link this back to us if you put this on a site or something.


Rainbow Dash, Pinkie © Lauren Faust
Art © Me
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Comments: 303

Xtermanator In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 12:51:08 +0000 UTC]

lawl

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Toxic-Mario In reply to Xtermanator [2012-02-07 08:43:56 +0000 UTC]

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LavaZombie In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 12:20:25 +0000 UTC]

Careful! The effects of my signature are coming on!

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Toxic-Mario In reply to LavaZombie [2012-02-06 12:30:32 +0000 UTC]

Wait what?

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LavaZombie In reply to Toxic-Mario [2012-02-06 12:38:24 +0000 UTC]

Exactly!

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fuzzyhead12 In reply to LavaZombie [2012-02-06 18:28:08 +0000 UTC]

woot?

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LavaZombie In reply to fuzzyhead12 [2012-02-06 20:25:57 +0000 UTC]

Woot for us, not for the one who does so.

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GammaEradon In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 11:44:46 +0000 UTC]

Poor Dashie! *Hugs her*

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Toxic-Mario In reply to GammaEradon [2012-02-07 08:43:58 +0000 UTC]

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RaenBoow [2012-02-06 11:03:05 +0000 UTC]

I could hear her voice in the last panel Q___Q My heart broke a little.... good job....

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Toxic-Mario In reply to RaenBoow [2012-02-07 08:44:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Hopalongtom [2012-02-06 09:43:01 +0000 UTC]

Your still first in line for next year!!

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Toxic-Mario In reply to Hopalongtom [2012-02-07 08:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Indeed

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richfiles [2012-02-06 09:40:54 +0000 UTC]

Goes to Canterlot market to get some imported Cider from Prance.
Hay Dashie... Herd you were feeling down. How bout some free hugs and free cider!

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Toxic-Mario In reply to richfiles [2012-02-07 08:43:34 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Sledgomatic [2012-02-06 09:20:12 +0000 UTC]

Pinkie's eyes are fine, but she could do with another eyebrow, something that looks like a ^. It's Rainbow's eyes in panel four that look funky to me. Thin out the mascara little, and rotate the iris to match the angle of the head, and you're golden.

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Toxic-Mario In reply to Sledgomatic [2012-02-06 10:47:39 +0000 UTC]

thanks...I'll do that on the next comic.

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PIcaRDMPC [2012-02-06 09:13:25 +0000 UTC]

Frankly I think your slightly modified style is just fine, Toxic. Don't worry about what some of the haters say.

This was both funny and heartbreaking. Poor Dashie...

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Toxic-Mario In reply to PIcaRDMPC [2012-02-06 10:47:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah but people wanted it.

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drake-rex [2012-02-06 08:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Poor Dashie T.T

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Toxic-Mario In reply to drake-rex [2012-02-06 10:47:01 +0000 UTC]

she needs a hug

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drake-rex In reply to Toxic-Mario [2012-02-06 17:12:48 +0000 UTC]

She can have two

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kamenriderculamon In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 08:19:29 +0000 UTC]

She just can't win.

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Toxic-Mario In reply to kamenriderculamon [2012-02-06 10:46:51 +0000 UTC]

unfortunately

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retsuke In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 07:59:52 +0000 UTC]

click the pic to enlarge it!

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Toxic-Mario In reply to retsuke [2012-02-06 09:09:07 +0000 UTC]

yes

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Teyandee05 [2012-02-06 07:39:21 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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Toxic-Mario In reply to Teyandee05 [2012-02-06 09:08:53 +0000 UTC]

or a hug

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SirCxyrtyx In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 07:36:44 +0000 UTC]

I think this is your best comic yet. The writing was better, and making the eyes ovals really does make it look better. One tiny thing: In panels 3 and 4, RD's wings are huge and pointy.

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Toxic-Mario In reply to SirCxyrtyx [2012-02-06 09:08:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeah but i had to cause of the close shot

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FurryXXI In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 07:26:56 +0000 UTC]

Trombone: *Waaah! Waaah! Waaah! Wuaaaaah!*

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Toxic-Mario In reply to FurryXXI [2012-02-06 07:30:10 +0000 UTC]

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fandude12 In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 07:19:29 +0000 UTC]

love that joke

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Toxic-Mario In reply to fandude12 [2012-02-06 07:25:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Dramelka In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 07:08:23 +0000 UTC]

Im surprised, Rainbow Dash can actually wait!

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Toxic-Mario In reply to Dramelka [2012-02-06 07:25:12 +0000 UTC]

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zeldamaster52 In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 06:53:15 +0000 UTC]

so much rainbow dash abuse. and shes my favorite pony too

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Toxic-Mario In reply to zeldamaster52 [2012-02-06 07:25:22 +0000 UTC]

Not abuse...just bad timing

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gilgagoogyta In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 06:39:14 +0000 UTC]

Twilight Zone reference. I giggled thoroughly!

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Toxic-Mario In reply to gilgagoogyta [2012-02-06 07:25:28 +0000 UTC]

it is?

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gilgagoogyta In reply to Toxic-Mario [2012-02-09 17:07:56 +0000 UTC]

In the original series, there's an episode called "Time Enough at Last". The ending involved a similar line to the last one featured here, but I suppose it was just coincidental. Also, I really admired RD's agony!

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MasteroftheContinuum In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 06:31:48 +0000 UTC]

check out her tail in those two panels. Pinkie Pie powers, activate!

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Toxic-Mario In reply to MasteroftheContinuum [2012-02-06 07:25:40 +0000 UTC]

XD

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W0nderbolts In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 06:31:26 +0000 UTC]

anyone notice dashie's tail is breaking 4th wall and going past the perimeter of each panel?

also *hugs dashie*

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Toxic-Mario In reply to W0nderbolts [2012-02-06 07:25:41 +0000 UTC]

Glad you saw it

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W0nderbolts In reply to Toxic-Mario [2012-02-06 07:29:13 +0000 UTC]

did anyone else notice?

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Toxic-Mario In reply to W0nderbolts [2012-02-06 07:30:18 +0000 UTC]

A few....

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W0nderbolts In reply to Toxic-Mario [2012-02-06 07:32:19 +0000 UTC]

we deserve a llama badge for our efforts!! lol

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LukeZaz In reply to ??? [2012-02-06 06:30:58 +0000 UTC]

Rainbows tail broke fourth wall.

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Toxic-Mario In reply to LukeZaz [2012-02-06 07:24:23 +0000 UTC]

glad you saw that

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