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Toxic-Mario — What the Hay
Published: 2013-10-27 19:53:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 31151; Favourites: 789; Downloads: 161
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Wow......when was the last time I did a nighttime comic?
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm.....looks like it was April or so. Granted I have done Night single pics with Wereluna or Semi-dark sky ones with the DBZ pony pics. Well, regardless the muffin is still hidden in this comic. Find the muffin for poor Derpy. 
So yeah I know what you are gonna say about this comic......but I wanted to do my own spin on it. Come on....it's a FANDOM CLASSIC.
I actually haven't seen this version I did for the 'Hitting the Hay'. Actually this has been a comic I wanted to do for a while. What I find weird is for as little night time comics I do this is one of the better night scenes I've done for a comic.Anyway I think this comic speaks for itself.
Hope your guys like this one. Season 4 is about a month away and with the way I planned my scheduling for stuff I have more than enough stuff to last till S4. HOORAY!!!! Time spent: 20+ hours
How I did it: Paper then Photoshop CS6
Filly Derpy, Filly Pinkie, Filly Rainbow Dash © Hasbro
Art © Me
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Comments: 335
I remember when I first entered the MLP fandom I read this comic and I had no idea who the grey Pegasus was or even if she was canon but I was still sufficiently amused.
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When PINKIE questions what you're doing, then you know you're doing weird.
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Love cheesy puns! I'm one of the few people who can read all of the Xanth series of books and not tire of the puns.
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MUFFINS ARE IN EVERY DERPY COMIC!!
I appreciate that...
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Lyra wants to know where you got those gloves, Derpy.
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She's a wrrrrrreckin' machine! A wrrrrrreckin' machine!
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when she hits the hay, she MEANS to hit the hay! (And I found her muffin)
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Found the muffin! Not gonna tell you where it is! Go find it yourself!
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Twilight:Where were you at 10:00?
Derpy:Hitting the hay.
Twilight:You we're asleep?
Derpy:No I WAS HITTING THAT HAY!
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I found the muffin! It's in the fourth panel!
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wow... what a pun.
Hit the hay. HAHAHAHAHA
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pinkie: OH DERPY! XP
*background laughter*
RBD: TYTPICAL DERPY XP
*clapping, credits roll*
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*Cough* Another pun? *Cough cough*
*Clears throat*
Look...I don't want to be rude, but you do too many pun strips. I know I've already said this before but...To me its like you have a bunch of potential, that is kept under lock & key by the endless amount of pun strips you do.
Please don't hide this comment. And at least try to read this carefully. I'm trying to be nice, not push you around.
Things for you too improve on:
-Work on your drawing of ponys. Their not terrible, but they look to much like fillies. Even if you we're going for fillies, you can't base all your comics off fillies. It wouldn't kill you to try drawing the shape of a pony that isn't a filly.
-ENOUGH WITH TEH PUNS! I'm serious. I know I've conned on you a thousand times for this. But despite some of your non-pun strips (E.G: 'Guardian Angel') theres still alot of room to improve on your jokes. I'd suggest going to a comedy show. They have plenty of non-pun jokes for you to learn from.
-Please, please, please, PLEASE start taking critiscism the right way. Hiding it just makes the situation worse. Theres a reason labba94 took the time to write the description in 'Maestro's Newest Creation'.
I dearly hope you actually took the time to read this, and didn't hide my comment as soon as you saw my name. And trust me. Art isn't easy for me either. Go look at some of the pony fiction in my 'Gallery' folder. Its not the worst, but whenever I think about it, I cringe a little. Does that stop me from trying? No. And it shouldn't be the case for you either, just because a few people tried to critique your artwork.
Please take this comment into consideration, like I've said so many times before. I don't want to have to make another comment. As I said before: I'm trying to be as nice, and civilized as possible, not throw you around like a plaything.
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