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ToxicToothpick — BOSCH and Nyle

Published: 2019-01-26 22:14:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 10599; Favourites: 152; Downloads: 16
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I juggle so many damn story ideas sometimes that some literally drop out the back of my brain, and I don’t notice until I see them on the floor later and pick them back up. 

One that I recently plucked back up is a story called “The Tower”. 

Based in a desolate post-disaster Earth setting, it focuses on a young trans man named Nyle Cho who lives in a town with a gigantic and ominous tower set in it’s middle. This tower houses an oppressive-authoritarian governing body and it’s leader: “the Master” that exploits the towns citizens. No one remembers how the tower got there or how long it’s been since it appeared.

Since memory began however, the town has culled groups of people to journey into the tower and attempt to fight their way to the Master at the top. Every 5 years this ritual takes place, but no one successfully makes it past all the floors to the top. With no returning survivors all manner of terrifying traps, environments, and monsters are dreamed up by the townsfolk to reside on each of it’s floors to kill hostile intruders. 

While outside the town’s walls scavenging with his blind childhood friend Rashida (art forthcoming) he digs up the strange and dormant humanoid creature who calls herself BOSCH(after the name printed on her stomach). Able to spawn/manifest weapons out her body’s material, she’s a 10ft tall, regenerating, walking armory.  

Together with Rashida and BOSCH, Nyle will journey with others into the tower to try like many before them. They’ll fight their way up the unimaginable terrors and foes of it’s many floors to overthrow the tyrannical Master at the top and free his town. 

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Comments: 8

Jimbit [2019-01-28 18:02:06 +0000 UTC]

Ooo, I love the concept   

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ToxicToothpick In reply to Jimbit [2019-01-28 20:07:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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emperorgonzonoir666 [2019-01-27 12:15:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm getting a Yellow Devil vibe off Bosch. 

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bunny75 [2019-01-27 09:13:11 +0000 UTC]

Awesome story, though with no one to return, how do people think it is even possible to pass even the first floor? All they know it is certain death waiting for anyone who enter.

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ToxicToothpick In reply to bunny75 [2019-01-28 20:07:04 +0000 UTC]

They don't. It's party of the mystery. But they have no other choice to try and throw off that yoke of oppression. 

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SwordSparks [2019-01-26 22:30:16 +0000 UTC]

Sounds awesome!

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Mr-Undisclosed [2019-01-26 22:22:38 +0000 UTC]

Get you a friend that can make UNLIMITED SWORDS. So you can have swords for all your friends! 

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ToxicToothpick In reply to Mr-Undisclosed [2019-01-28 20:06:36 +0000 UTC]

You'll be ready when the teacher says, "I hope you brought enough swords for everyone". 

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