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ToxShadows642 — [Fakemon/Request] Childread - Flatspook

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Published: 2016-12-20 03:55:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1185; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 3
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Description And now, the last of this request that took me so long to complete! Heheh, I feel really nice now!
And remember, no more requests until I finish the other two that I have pending!


This Fakemon was requested by

This are Phantoko and Flatspook, two Fakemon based on the events related to the "Flatwoods Monster", and well, if you want to know what is this, here's the link: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flatwood…

Ahh! finally, my dudes, fina... Hey! I started the other one in the same way! Ehh... whatever... Ok, ok, I have to say this, this two were finished waaay before than the other ones that I posted on saturday (and those were even finished on that day), so, why I didn't post this ones first? Well, that because I like them a lot! I don't know about you, but I like how cute Childread looks, and how it evolves into the creppy and mysterious Flatspook!

The little one, I tried to make a "baby" Flatwoods Monster, but intead I got a ghostly (and in my opinion, cute) little Red Riding Hood (I thought about name it "Childread" because of this), and with that I decided to use it as a theme to give it and its evolution the "Flatwoods Mon." look. So, instead of a weird metalic... "thing" behind the head (like in here: www.wvculture.org/goldenseal/F… ), it is a hood in a very similar shape, giving it a more, let's say "personal/original" touch.
And the evolution, well, as you can see, it has kinda the same pose (the one representavite of the creature that it's based on), the torso is metallic, and has sharp claws, again, to look like the F.M. The eyes are my favorite part, they look souless, and give a nice contrast in relation with the rest of the body. And finally, the cape, I don't know, I put it because I thought it looked cool, and give a "Ghostly" effect.

Well, I think I wrote a lot already (and that's why probably no one reads my stuff... ) Now, the descriptions:


Childread's Description:

Lure pokemon
Type: Ghost
Height: 1'04" / 0.4 m
Weight: 2.2 lbs / 1 kg 
Etymology: Childread's name comes from Children, and Dread.

Ability: Cute Charm/Prankster
H.A: Cursed Body
Signature Move: Infant Cry*
Evolution:
Childread evolves into Flatspook leveling up while holding a Metal Coat during the night.

This Pokemon lures humans imiting the scream of a little girl, and if they succed on making them to go on the deeps of a forest, they will give them a big scare, just for fun. But still, they are cases in wich the lured humans never come back.

STATS
HP:         55
Atk:        25
Def:        65
Sp. Atk:   90
Sp. Def:   65
Spe:        95

TOTAL:  395


*: The user makes a scream identic to the one of a scared little kid, confusing the target, and sharply reducing it's Attack. This move confuses and drops the Attack stat by two stages.
Type: Ghost
Category: Status
Power: -
Accuracy: 100%

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Flatspook's Description:

Alien Monster pokemon
Type: Ghost/Steel
Height: 5'03"  / 1.6 m
Weight: 134 lbs / 134 lbs 
Etymology: Flatspook's name comes from Flatwoods, and Spook. Yeah, not the most original name, but still, I think it sounds cool!

Ability: Phantom's Mist (The uses spreads a mysterious mist every time it enter in battle, badly poisoning all the other Pokemon in the field.)
H.A: Cursed Body

Flatspook live in the deep of some forests, taking care of the Childread, and using them to get food.
This is Pokemon that's really hard to see in the wild, mostly due to it's higly poisonous mist, and incredible speed.

STATS

HP:          60
Atk:         85
Def:        100
Sp. Atk:   140
Sp. Def:   65  
Spe:        150

TOTAL:  600


I hope you like it, and until the next one!
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Comments: 13

TheExtremeTardigrade [2016-12-20 18:50:40 +0000 UTC]

It is beautiful and amazing! I love it

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ToxShadows642 In reply to TheExtremeTardigrade [2016-12-21 00:00:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm really really glad, dude!

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TheExtremeTardigrade In reply to ToxShadows642 [2016-12-21 20:26:50 +0000 UTC]

:3

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kmyc89 [2016-12-20 09:12:14 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic

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ToxShadows642 In reply to kmyc89 [2016-12-20 12:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Poke-Poet4 [2016-12-20 04:30:19 +0000 UTC]

I like these, I like the inspiration, the execution, the stat changes between evolution stages, the abilities, all of it! But I think Childread would've been a better name. And I kind of wish that you had gone all-in on the Little Red Riding Hood thing. They fit that role and I can totally see them pretending to be like a girl in a red cloak to lure their prey in. And the speed could be useful for escaping since it's Defenses actually go down instead of up despite it becoming Ghost/Steel. I understand the Flatwoods Monster was fast, but this seems to have the same problem as Lycanroc: Something from a type known for high defense and low speed switched to high speed and low defense , making it a one-hit glass cannon. Balancing the Speed and defenses would've been much better so it could still be solid and take a few hits while being able to hit fast and hard. It just doesn't make sense is all. Gaining a Steel-typing but LOSING Defense stats? That's the opposite of what should happen. 

I'm sorry, maybe I'm taking my anger over Lycanroc being so fragile despite being a Rock-type out on this pokemon's similar situation. But it still makes no sense for either of them.

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ToxShadows642 In reply to Poke-Poet4 [2016-12-20 05:02:15 +0000 UTC]

No, no. Don't be sorry, you are right, it WAS suposed to gain defenses, but I was too focused on giving it a 167 stat just like the other one from saturday, and because I didn't wanted to make it too broken, I decided to give it bad defenses... Aaand again, I forgot to check the stats of the prevo because of my own ignorance... And it ended up with less defenses than it.

But, you know what, I think that if I wanted to make counterparts, having the same number in total stats would be enough. Tell me, how's this?

HP:         60
Atk:        85
Def:        100
Sp. Atk:   140
Sp. Def:   65   (I think that this can stay the same)
Spe:        150

TOTAL:  600  (Also, I just updated Pascaggernaut's stats to match this one)

And... Yes, you're right, Childread sounds better, I thought in changing the name a few minutes after posting it. Also, about the Little Red Riding Hood thing... Yeah I could have use the concept for more, but I didn't because I wanted the theme of "Flatwoods Monster" to be the most prominent, mostly because the request point was to be like it. But yeah, I can see what you meant by that.

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Poke-Poet4 In reply to ToxShadows642 [2016-12-20 05:23:55 +0000 UTC]

It's color scheme just brings that to mind, so now big deal that it is less like Little Red Riding Hood.  

Yeah, that seems like it could work for the stats it could have. And I agree with the weak Sp. Def. Partly because when I first saw an iteration of the Flatwoods Monster(which included a disturbing face for it), my first thought was "KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!" XDDD

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ToxShadows642 In reply to Poke-Poet4 [2016-12-20 12:42:03 +0000 UTC]

Hahah! And well, I thank you again! You know? For some reason, I barely receive any kind of critisism here, so most of the time, I really don't know what people looks good/bad, or what I can change/improve, etc. Both sprites, and the things I write. So, I really appreciate when someone tooks the time to say things like this to me, it helps me to improve!

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Poke-Poet4 In reply to ToxShadows642 [2016-12-20 16:23:19 +0000 UTC]

I'm opinionated and creative, think logically, consider myself a know-it-all, and don't often pick up on social norms as easily. So I guess I'm just the right sort of person to find faults and point them out when no one else will. If anything, I should be thanking you for putting up with my constant criticism and suggestions of how to change YOUR ideas. A lot of people find me hard to deal with, so I'm glad to know I'm helping.

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ToxShadows642 In reply to Poke-Poet4 [2016-12-21 00:38:30 +0000 UTC]

And you being like that is ok. I mean, yeah, is easy to understand why some people don't like to be criticized, but is something that needs to be used like a tool to be better at things, and not to be seen like an "attack" to the person.

And yeah, you really are helping!

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nolovo [2016-12-20 04:10:07 +0000 UTC]

Looks more like a heartless than a pokemon.

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ToxShadows642 In reply to nolovo [2016-12-20 04:22:01 +0000 UTC]

Hahah! You're right! I think that I need to improve my style a little bit more.

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