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Published: 2011-08-30 03:00:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 121; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Lacerate the flesh so I may tear our your insides
As the rib cage comes into view I reach in and grasp the bones
Use all my force and all my might to shatter the bones
Dissecting your body I am, viewing each organ
I rip out your heart and try to see perceptions and desires
I am aware of the contemptuous actions that I am committing here
But my curiosity urges me to continue further into my research
So I eviscerate you and tear our your spine
Leave you unable to stand on your ground

This is an invasion
Kill everyone in sight
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Comments: 5

dancexaway [2011-09-05 23:12:33 +0000 UTC]

I like this. it's vivid and unique

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TragicTen In reply to dancexaway [2011-09-05 23:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Thankkk youu (:

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dancexaway In reply to TragicTen [2011-09-05 23:36:05 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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sallyvonschnapps [2011-09-04 04:46:17 +0000 UTC]

Your writing is reminiscent of TOOL. I love it.

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TragicTen In reply to sallyvonschnapps [2011-09-04 04:48:21 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I don't like Tool. But my brother loves them. I'm more into heavier metal bands like Trivium.

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