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Published: 2014-08-26 17:49:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 54968; Favourites: 258; Downloads: 374
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Commission by !Lady Tempest starts to miss her old life, and to help her out, Invincibelle reveals a personal secret.
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'Belle's dialogue here, so far as I can remember, was aaaaall Ian. He's very good at that.
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From what I've gathered, Tempest is basically that magician guy's mind-controlled sexslave, and... now you're trying to turn it into a story about morality and choice?
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"sex slave" is taking it pretty darn far. Debonair'd lose his hero license if he really abused his powers that way.
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As he should! Nobody goes from "I'm gonna kill you" to "ooh, you're kinda cute" that fast without a deprivation of willpower. Especially if they put a considerable amount of effort into their manly physique, burly beard, and showed NO signs of gender disassociation... or maybe I'm just thinking of this way too hard :/
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You'll have to wait until later comics to find out for sure!
Might be worth noting that Lord Tempest is/was a Greek-style god rather than an actual human, though...they're a little odd in the head to begin with. Wired differently.
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damn i am liking this, finally someone treats a tg story with more seriousness
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Any story with life-changing effects deserves to be taken at least a little seriously.
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yet very few gender bend comics take that route
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Maybe "Best left undisturbed"?
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Hmm - It might be kinda sorta a 'flammable/inflammable' situation in which neither work, but there definitely should be a different phrasing - will fix!
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Whoops, I think I spotted a slight problem in panel 4, too...is there something getting cut off in Tempest's dialogue there?
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I don't see a problem there. She's kind of changing her mind about what she's saying in the middle of a sentence though.
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