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Transformers-Mosaic β Human Component Minerva
Published: 2009-05-04 08:08:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 7137; Favourites: 62; Downloads: 340
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Story and Art : Ivan Mas [link]Special Thanks: Carlos Oliveros [link]
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Excellent! Β Loving the art on this. Β Like the use of the comic 'dot' texture too.
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jjajja que cambiazo el de la minerva...esta mucho mejor que megan
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this piece reminds me a lot of the
chris-claremont / marc-silvestri / jim-lee era of x-men.
there was a lot of dialogue or exposition, but it worked
well within the composition and layout of the page.
ivan mas' style also recalls silvestri and lee, but with more...
texture, hatching and cross-hatching.
i'm not really familiar with the continuity, but i enjoyed this nevertheless...
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Good job! It's nice to see a somewhat uncommon character in the spotlight!
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dont understand the continuity but GREAT artwork!
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Ooooo, I really like this one. It was very interesting and I didn't get lost like I do with a lot of other comics. The art work is very well done.
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I always thought it'd be cool if Minerva ended up being Spike and Carley's daughter.
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Its not the verbosity that bothers me, its the tone of it and context. Her parents ask how she is doing, and she mentally rants about how the question is just keeping up appearances or rather how its "like they carried out an agreement". Then, que mental summary of epic battles in the show. And their enemies are "souless, nothing". Wow. Bit much, bit heavy.
The whole mental dialogue is incredibly over dramatic for a scenario that began with "hi dear how are you doing?".
That aside, it is good writing and beautiful artwork.
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Nice to see a Mosaic that deals with one of the Japanese continuities. I like all the little touches like the Japanese text logo!
Stunning mono artwork - very high quality indeed. And I for one have no problem with the amount of text on the page. There's a school of thought in comics that says this sort of thing is to be avoided, but to be honest, when it's done as well as it is here, and it realises a full story, there's nothing to worry about.
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way too much dialogue,though this is a beautiful
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Likewise.
The dialogue feels like it is forced and unnatural.
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? ....... yes , and the cover isnΒ΄t titanic.....
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Nothing important....
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I told thim that was a bit too much
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Partially that, and then there's tone. I suppose being the daughter of an ambassador would give a bit of leeway on explaining the verbosity, although it'd make more sense if it was a bit more formal. Like Relena from "Gundam Wing" - she's a diplomat's daughter and she speaks in a formal manner.
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beautiful and the words compliment the artwork, dont think of the dialogue boxes as a seperate entity but as a part of the artwork, its not really meant to be read its just part of the art
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No quitaria absolutamente nada, si acaso ,aΓ±adiria, y por tema de espacio ya es bastante mas complicao.
No importa, hasta cierto punto ( y no creo que sea el caso ya que la pagina esta bien equlibrada a nivel visual ), la cantidad de texto que haya , mientras que lo que se diga sea interesante o bueno, no obstante aqui ya entrariamos en otro tema.
Pero creo que es normal que haya texto ya que se intenta definir mas o menos la psicologia de un personaje.
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Es lo mismo de siempre... no me parece que haya demasiado texto...visto lo visto, no obstante si hiciera una pagina " normal " no la haria asi.
El caso de la cantidad de texto me parece logico, normal y asumible.... ya que intento explicar en una pagina lo que seguramente deberia hacerse en 10 o 12.
No me interesa explicar: la traicion de Starscream hacia Megatron , o lo simpatico que es Hot Rod.
Intento explicar o hablar sobre personajes o sobre una serie que no se ha visto en todos los paises y sin demasiada difusion. Asi pues, tenemos que tratar o presentar muchas cosas o conceptos para dejar las menos lagunas posibles, dentro de la complejidad del tema.
Luego, el tema de la "cantidad" de texto me parece un "problema" logico, teniendo en cuenta el espacio que tenemos, y no es una critica, pero asi son las normas, y me parecen bien.
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Didn't expect anything less from Ivan as far as the art goes. Bravo.
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Awesome artwork, and intriguing dialogue too! Truly amazing!
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Wow 
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Artwork is top notch. Very nice, incredible. Story is great too and fits with the art perfectly. I can't describe this with words that would do it justice.
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Wow that was interesting, really enjoyed it. Superb artwork aswell.
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