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Published: 2016-10-24 01:16:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 6869; Favourites: 180; Downloads: 0
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Drawtober Days 19-23... xDNot really much of a daily drawing; I guess.
I should of remembered that the previous comic took two days, but that was mainly because two panels repeated themselves.
Finally done though!
Hope you enjoy!
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Comments: 32
I honestly love this. I read comics quite often and just love the comedy the fonts the Art its all amazing! <3 I think the Vison is amazing and i have though seemed Comics like this joke on alot of other things but i say you captured the looks better and i highly doubt you would ever copy. I also never wrote one of these before. I just love this comic and will be reading more from you! The art style perfect the joke amazing the technique Brilliant! I could never be able to do this!!!!!!! Epic art! and comic!
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I am so sorry I didn't get to your critique in time, I've been away from DA for a while. D:
I would of accepted this in a heartbeat!
I really wish I got to this sooner!
Ah! Your words! Thank you! ;w;
I hope you'll enjoy the things to come!
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As someone who doesn't read these comics very often, I must say this is pretty good! Granted, I recognized the basic scenario from the Winter Soldier, but it makes up for that with the resolution, which is both pretty funny, and kind of heartwarming.
The panels also make some good use of perspective, and flow pretty well into each other, and the lack of detail in the background allows the comedic punchline to be delivered at just the right speed for the best possible impact.
I'd say the only problem is that Alphys' arms look a bit too thin in the earlier panels, and in the very first, her shoulder looks too muscular, but these are very small issues, and it's probably just personal taste that's making me think that way.
Great job on this one!
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While I did not mention it in the description, I was hesitant to make this comic due to those two being so closely related; I even wonder now whether I accidentally made it too much of a parody in comparison. '3'
I'm glad to hear how it held its impact; but I'm really glad to hear about its flow-- due to a little worry from scrapping a few panels from the thumbnail I made.
Also, yea that first panel had a few issues with it; a friend even pointed out that Undyne could of been more dynamic in pose in that same panel.
Thank you for your criticism, I really appreciated it! c:
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I've actually seen plenty of other comics that took their main scenarios from various Disney movies, SpongeBob, and the Game Grumps, so I'm used to the parody comics by now. Even still, in this example, I believe the chemistry between the two shines through.
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Hey! Would it be alright with you if I dubbed this comic? You will be credited in the video and the comic will be linked in the description. Thanks!
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i wonder has any of you guys notice burgerpants and nice cream guy just chilling in the background?
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So far you're the first to notice them! XD
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: *Undyne is carrying you home...
*You are filled with Determination...
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x3
Noice!
*You carry Alphys home... You are also filled with Determination...
*Maybe a bit too much...
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Haha, I couldn't resist saying that ^^
Whoa, Undyne, don't go all melty on us now...is that how it works? o_o
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Thats what some people assume; that Undyne becomes Undyne the Undying through Determination to protect peoples. xD
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Yeah, I saw that part on youtube ehehe *feels a whoosh from Undyne running by and hears Spear of Justice in Fast Forward* yipe! o_o
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Love that comic of repetition here! These is awesome!
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Undyne and Alphys usually are! x3
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Probably me too, it can be hard to build endurance at the start. xD
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true. i suppose it'll eventually be worth it tho lol
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Dang straight! x3
Best couple in Undertale! -w-
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