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Published: 2011-02-28 05:30:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 320; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Damn it, I can't let myself die now. Too much is at stake. My Love, my baby, my brother, my nephew. God damn it! Get up! I said get up!!!. Ahh! My head, Did I smash it into something again, or was something smashed against it? I don't know, I can't see, or even feel anything! &%$#!!!!!!!!!! Why the Hell do I have to be so weak!? Am I on my feet now? I can't tell, am I moving, I think I am, I can't tell, It feels like it. Damn, My stomach now as a pain where there was none before. Was I hit there? Shit! Get up you sorry excuse for a father! Get up and save your son!!! If not him then no one! I can't let this happen! I won't let it happen. I am so numb..... Wait a minute, my arm doesn't bend that way, it shouldn't anyway. #%$@ it's broken, $#@% it all! Damn why can't I do anything right!? I tried to be a good Daddy, I tried to be a good husband, I tried to be a good uncle, I tried to be a good brother..... I failed.... I failed everyone. God, I am so sorry, I could do what you needed me to in this life. I have failed you God, I am so sorry, so very sorry. I can't do it anymore, I have given my last breath, all my energy.... and I failed, everyone is going to suffer and or die. I can't bare to live any longer, everything I tried to do for you God is just a complete and utter disrespect. I can't bare to look upon your face when I reach heaven. I am so sorry... please.... forgive me God..... I can't do it any more.... don't let my family suffer because of............... my failure........ please...... I'm so sorry....................... I'm so sorry God................................................... I am so sorry God........................................................................... God...................................Wait......... what was that?.................. There it is again..................................... Wait a minute........................................ Is that a light?......................... Wait............. is someone saying something?......................................... I can't hear you...................................... Say it again!.......................... Louder!!!............................ Don't.....give.......up?......................... Don't give up?................... Who are you?..................................... No way....................................... It can't be............. Is it really you?.............. Jesus?......................... But I can't do anything, I am dead......................... Wait............................. what do you mean?................... My baby?................... I know he needs me, but.................. I know my Nephew needs me to but.................... I can't.............. I am week.................. My body is broken........................... you will be my strength? How?................................ Hang on...... what's happening to me? How can I see now? How the hell did I get on my feet? Is that my son in my good arm hugging me and kissing my face? How on earth................... Gloria? My love, you're alive?! Artimen! My brother, you and Cornelius are alive to?................... I can't speak, but I feel so light.... All of my enemies......... How the hell? Why are they all on the ground dead? I can't hear what is going on, Everyone is saying something................ Arty, I can't hear you. Let me read your lips......... "are-you-okay"...... No....... crap......... I can't speak. I have to shake my head.......... "what's-wrong"........... Am I even blinking? I can't speak or even move now. But I'm not in pain anymore, is this what it feels like to be between the point of death and life........ what is going on? "Alex----can-you-under-stand-me" I can Arty, I just can't respond. God help me please, I don't know what to do....................... Relax!!!!!!? How the hell am I suppose to RELAX!!!!!....................... I'm safe................ I'm....... safe............. oh thank you God....... Thank you so much............ thank you!........ Thank you!............ Dark again..... I guess this is what you call respite after the battle........... Thank you God, Thank you Jesus.......... Thank you...... thank you................
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Thank you. But this will soon be work shopped so don't think that this one will stay the same.
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Thanks so much. What did you like particularly about it?
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I liked how emotional it was! Like, I really felt like a lot of emotion went into writing it. It shows.
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Interesting. Anything else?
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Hmm, I dunno. I just liked it I guess. 
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Okay. 
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Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelllllllllll................. I can recommend some of my stories that you may like.
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Okay, here is some light an easy reading.
[link] just to start you off.
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I will go read and comment :3
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Oh, and by the way, I haven't really edited that story yet, just warning you.
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Haha it's okay. I'll post some criticism when I get around to reading it xD Sorry, I just rarely have the energy to read anything online. But I bookmarked it and I will
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Yeeeah, I always feel bad about it, being a writer and all, but maaaan...I'm so lazy >_>
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Thanks so much. What did you like about it?
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I repeat again, I usually forget things.
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Why do you like the into to the story?
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For fun I love the intro and yours to me like fun.
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How are you doing long time no talk to you?
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Been Veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy busy!!!!!!
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