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Published: 2011-10-12 01:58:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 933; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 2
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Description So, I scrapped my idea for Alfred and Vachel for various reasons. This is my replacement.

Meet Batu and Zamir.

Batu is a Tauros that hails from the Whispering Peaks. Because these mountains were so cold, his fur grew long and shaggy to protect him from the harsh winds. He doesn't speak much, but when he does it's usually in broken sentences with improper grammar. He wears bells on his horns to attract potential customers.

Moves: zen headbutt, tail whip, stomp, bulldoze

Zamir is a Delibird with an eye for treasure. He loves to collect rare items. He rides around on Batu's back as they travel the world selling their merchandaise. Unlike Batu, he is a fast-talker and a bit of a swindler. He loves collecting stories just as much as treasure and will share tales from his travels wherever they go.

Moves: Fake out, icy wind, captivate, pluck

These two never like to stay more than a couple of nights in the same place. They are most comfortable moving around.
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Comments: 10

PandaTheBox [2011-10-13 03:32:14 +0000 UTC]

I like the purple on Batu.

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Werepuppy26 [2011-10-12 21:10:05 +0000 UTC]

They sound interesting! I love all the bells and stuff on Batu

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sonyathehedgragon [2011-10-12 11:48:49 +0000 UTC]

i like the idea but the accessories seem a bit too much, if you don't mind my saying

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Trinosaur In reply to sonyathehedgragon [2011-10-12 14:49:55 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps you are right. I was trying to come with something unique without going overboard. I wasn't quite sure where to draw the line so-to-speak. I figured bells on his horns, a scarf, and some merchandaise on his back wasn't too much but maybe I was wrong? The bells are supposed to jingle so that customers can hear them coming. Maybe I should include that in the description.

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sonyathehedgragon In reply to Trinosaur [2011-10-13 00:18:49 +0000 UTC]

yeah that would give more purpose but maybe it's just the color of the merchandise and the bells that make me think that it's too much

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Trinosaur In reply to sonyathehedgragon [2011-10-13 01:41:39 +0000 UTC]

So you think it's a little overzealous? Alright. Well, what colors do you think would work better?

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sonyathehedgragon In reply to Trinosaur [2011-10-13 01:43:24 +0000 UTC]

i think making the purples a little darker might help and maybe substituting green for a shade of blue but it's your choice

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Trinosaur In reply to sonyathehedgragon [2011-10-13 01:44:49 +0000 UTC]

No, I really appreciate the input. It helps me improve. Thanks very much!

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sonyathehedgragon In reply to Trinosaur [2011-10-13 01:45:14 +0000 UTC]

no problem i hope my suggestions were helpful!

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sinistroscribe [2011-10-12 02:08:11 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, I love these guys so much <3

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