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truely-me-niece — write about you
Published: 2006-08-14 15:35:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 185; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description baby, you inspire me.

everytime i think of you
i want to pick up a pen

and write.


i could write about you
for hours,

if i tried...

capturing our love in words,
is complicated,



but i can write about how

you make me feel
when i get lost in your eyes...


i can write about

the tingling sensation,
that arouses between my thighs


i can write about

you, your gorgeous smile
that makes me do the same


i can write about

your hands, so strong...
with you, im always safe.


i can write about

us, together
and how i never want to leave,


i can write about

your kisses, so soft
as if it were a dream.



  See baby,

i can write about
how you make me feel
all day

but when i combine these emotions
.love.
its gets harder to explain.

Because baby, what we have is unknown
to complex for the human mind,

but yet so simple when its felt...
strong, pure, and refined.


I can write about you
for hours, baby

i could write about you
for days

because what we have is
oh so strong

and i hope it lasts

ALWAYS
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Comments: 16

faker-of-normality [2007-01-22 15:44:10 +0000 UTC]

aww.... it was choppy at all it was the bomb

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Latestcraze [2006-10-24 06:11:18 +0000 UTC]

Damn....that's was so ...so...good!!

~~Portia~~

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patientlove004 [2006-09-16 04:27:50 +0000 UTC]

beautifully written.

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truely-me-niece In reply to patientlove004 [2006-09-16 06:03:22 +0000 UTC]

thank u, appreciated

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Knight-of-dark [2006-08-22 18:32:54 +0000 UTC]

It flows so nicely, thats hard to do most of the time never mind when it's broken up... Real talent

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truely-me-niece In reply to Knight-of-dark [2006-08-22 18:39:09 +0000 UTC]

thank uuuuuuuuu

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Sunflow [2006-08-19 12:43:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that was an interesting touch at the end of your comment lol! Anyway nice again letting your feelings flow is important!

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faker-of-normality [2006-08-18 05:42:55 +0000 UTC]

aww i think its the best explanation of love i've read in a long while... its really kickin'

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truely-me-niece In reply to faker-of-normality [2006-08-18 18:06:58 +0000 UTC]

thank uuu

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living4him [2006-08-17 16:44:37 +0000 UTC]

lol I'm glad you are still pure. that is a GOOD thing.

Lovely writing my lady. ^^ I miss this feeling alot.

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truely-me-niece In reply to living4him [2006-08-17 20:15:42 +0000 UTC]

lol
thanx 4 the comment... and love
will come to u, it brushes past everyone lol

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living4him In reply to truely-me-niece [2006-08-17 21:34:03 +0000 UTC]

no problem. yeah, I hope it visits me agian soon.

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CandyHairspray [2006-08-17 12:20:27 +0000 UTC]

i really like this, it's so sweet =]

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truely-me-niece In reply to CandyHairspray [2006-08-17 20:14:47 +0000 UTC]

:] thnx

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Lycen [2006-08-15 13:42:34 +0000 UTC]

Awww wow I love it!!, and I can really relate :hugs:

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truely-me-niece In reply to Lycen [2006-08-15 16:29:24 +0000 UTC]

thank u

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