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I only try to review the compositionplz dont mind the details and design it's still suck right now TwT
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Very nice positioning and perception. The armor looks really good. Is that thing protecting him or attacking him?
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tysm the sommon-thing is both protecting and attack type with the fist armor > <
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I'd love to see this in a manga!!!
looks like an awesome manga page~
cant wait to read any manga by you
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I'll to make it asap Ran-Chan TwT
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...which pen? which ink?
or is it done digitally? if so then..which program? is it Manga Studio EX ?
And.. this is magnificent ... this is a MUST favorite!
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pencil draft and then I used pencil which darker do all the line-cut on paper, then scan and adjust it in computer with photoshop to look more like pen(grey to dark)
and erase the dust on the pic then fill black and effect with both in manga studio and photoshop
but 95% I'll do the effect and fill black with MGS 4ex but in some case I need to decorate it more with ps
this info should help much or less > <
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^-^
Thanks a lot for the info ~
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Ooh, this is cool! How in the hell does this suck?!
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I'll make something better than this one so u can compare, how it's suck on my point of view
but this pic I only focused on composition, what I meant about suck was about the design which I think I can make it better than this one
also the details, it should be more need in order to call it's a good details
by the way If I make something that I satisfy enough to call it a good one, I'll write it on my comment that I satisfy with it > < (that pic must be very good, I think lol TwT)
ps.sry about my poor eng lang TwT
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Don't worry, I understood what you said. And the explosion lines and the designs are so awesome! Even the simplest drawing can make the most impact, ya know?
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yeap, I try to clean up my line and make it simple as possible for manga (and it's easier to draw also lol ) > < and make to design simple but looks great > <
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So, then why would you want to add even more details, when what you have is already great?
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let say not the details to be even more but to tune and adjust it up to match for work
that should sound right > <
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Lol, ok so...improvements? Is that what you mean?
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not exactly improvement, let's say tuning it's better > <
ps. my draft of the tuning version of other sketch is already fin I'll upload it soon as the line cut is finished > <
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Dude this is so cool! I love the armor especially! The designing and detail definitely do not suck. This is very impressive.
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tysm by the way about the design, I'll try to revise my skill much more then I'll bring something that definitely a lot better than this
so u can compare it, what I meant about suck TwT
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Details and desing sucks? For me it looks awesome!
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I haven't touch about the manga design almost 2 years now and I feel like it can be better than this
and it might take a little more time to design the armor to look even more better > <
so I feel a bit suck on it ><
by the way thanks so much for your comment on my pic, I'm very appreciated TwT
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