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tryagainpixie — Counfusion lurks above
Published: 2003-01-24 20:15:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 166; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 24
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The first time i looked at uI thought real love was true
Then again my mind is not right
Now i must put u outta sight
I really wanted things to be there
But u were the one not being fair
Confusion shall linger
forever and ever
My life was torn apart
But now i got it back
Then again something is wrong....
I still think u need to be slapped
U laugh when thing are not funny
U lie when things are important
I am glad i have killed ur face
So now my head can be clear
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Comments: 2
it's good but i think the rhyme sceme is a bit to irratic
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Yeah, I think the poem is good, but what puts it don't slightly is the spelling, I mean the "u's" don't really fit in a serious poem like that. But that's just my opinion..
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