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tryagainpixie — .-im so very sorry-.
Published: 2003-12-08 15:50:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 116; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Description Dearest friend please understand
i never ment to hurt you in my hands
you got the best of me and then i broke
i'm so sorry that you had to choke

Kindest lover please look away
for if you think i am a maiden
i believe you have been betrayed
i'm so sorry what that letter contained

Softest grass please do not go
for i will miss you untill next folage
your smell will linger in my mind
yet i'm so sorry you had to die

Wonderful skys so blue and crisp
it's sad you have to leave into the mist
as winter is here and rain is domiant
i'm sorry i cant look up, i just cant

Thoughtful words for you have left as well
no more compliments on how you look so well
as much as it pains me
i'm sorry to say that you are what killed me
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Comments: 9

wakusei [2003-12-18 02:50:26 +0000 UTC]

I hope things get better. What lovely work

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soultown [2003-12-09 06:46:48 +0000 UTC]

-snug- Be happy...

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omnicloud [2003-12-09 03:08:59 +0000 UTC]

Nice poem. Hope you feel better though *hugs* ^^

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sheshechan [2003-12-09 02:16:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow... Strong stuff there. *tear* Feel better.

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Sieryu [2003-12-09 01:48:56 +0000 UTC]

i like this alot. it sounds like its really coming from the heart. great job :applause:

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demosthenes7 [2003-12-08 22:47:24 +0000 UTC]

now see what you made me do? I'm crying now!

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ixellent [2003-12-08 22:26:31 +0000 UTC]

aww pixie feel better, k? oh my god, i sounded like xander just then..

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jhonnydee [2003-12-08 20:40:43 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... sad... but is cute...

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tryagainpixie In reply to jhonnydee [2003-12-08 21:03:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks you

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