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TryHardBrony — Derpy :3
Published: 2012-11-15 09:55:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 2377; Favourites: 140; Downloads: 75
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This is my very 1st sketch Vector! Its obviously of Derpy, so yeah. 
I LOVE DERPY!!!! Please Comment, and enjoy! Oh, and once I learn to properly shade, I might come back thru and update this.
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*You may use this vector if you Credit me properly.
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Comments: 27
Overall, I would have to say that this is a high quality vector. I can tell that you know what you are doing and most of the mistakes I usually see when I am working on new vectors or looking at other people's are not present. In fact, from the quality of this, I would expect you to be a viable contributor to a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/l/m… " alt=" " title="MLP-VectorClub" />. However, there are a few places that I think you could improve thjs. Several of these come from the fact that you were working from someone else's pencil sketch. Vectors and pencils have different properties and carrying them over can detract from the overall appeal.
First of all, the lines should have probably been much thicker. The lines are what differentiate each part of the pony from the next and the thick lines define each part of the pony and help to keep it separate from other elements of an image.
Secondly, some of the edges are much sharper than they would be in the show. This is most noticeable in the wings. Several of the tips have fairly sharp bends where a more gradual curve would have been possible and looked more elegant. This can also be seen in the fore-hooves.
My last critique comes from my interpretation of what the original artist seems to be trying to convey. I saw the lines on Derpy's cheek to be the artists attempt to show a blush. I would have made those be a light pink and have another oval around them in a lighter pink and either 75-80% transparency or faded edges. The black lines may look fine in the original, but they seem awkward with the rest in color.
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I think it looks great!
Ok, lets start with the 'mistakes':
1. The front hooves seem round, a little TOO round.
2. The wings don't look like they properly connect to her back.
3. The ear is a bit pointy..
Now with the 'goods'!
1. You mad the color of her coat and mane dead on (again, if you know what i mean)
2. It is really cute!
3. You should have a muffin with her e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
I hate saying the 'mistakes'! I'm sorry if I hurt ur feelings D:
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I luv Derpy Hooves! Everypony should luv Derpy Hooves!!! '
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MUFFINS!
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I thank you very much for the critique. I appreciate it, but just as a reminder, I didn't draw this. For instance, the pointy ear, that is how the artist drew her. Secondly, while I do agree with you about the hooves being a bit to round, again, I didn't draw her like that. Its kind of a "don't shoot the messenger" thing. All I did was vector it out exactly like they drew it. That goes for the wings as well. :3 I really do appreciate it though. Just something to consider in the future. If the vector is of a sketch, be sure to check the artists original sketch first. (Maybe you did, Idk, but just in case you didn't.) Thanks again tho!
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btw do you use a tablet to vectorize things on ur comp?
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No, I just use my mouse. Wireless Logitech M510. Why do you ask?
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i don't know. my friend mentioned a tablet and how she uses it for drawing on her comp.
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Yeah, drawing. Lol, but vectoring is a whole different story. ^^
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Sweet! You did a great job vectoring it! Keep up the great work!
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Hey thanks!!
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Diferent but very nice! Look at she... If Derpy is Happy I'm happy XD Good Work
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I made from a sketch. Lol, so it looks like it does because that's how the artist wanted her to look. But thanks
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I like it because it doesn't look like the conventional Derpy
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Giving feedback is what I do best
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