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Published: 2015-06-29 16:56:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 35401; Favourites: 235; Downloads: 369
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this one is a commission of darkshadow278 ( darkshadow278.deviantart.com/ ) who ask me to made the model MariaAmanda as a mermaid.thank you to all they peoples who give me the stock pictures :
to MariaAmanda ( mariaamanda.deviantart.com/ ) for the body picture :
Colours of Autumn - Stock
to happeningstock ( happeningstock.deviantart.com/ ) for the classroom picture :
School Classroom with Chair
to Della-Stock ( della-stock.deviantart.com/ ) for the picture with the girls back :
Chicks Walking Away
Well a little resume :
It will be a girl into a new magical scholl under her new class, she been choosen into the formation "mystical creature study" for been transformed into a creature who go with her soul. She is been transformed into a mermaid. She look it with fun and listen with happiness the master explain some piont of what are the mermaid abilitys. She begin to be afraid when the class is over and the others begin to go out of the class. She ask at the master if she can go with they other because she will be late. It's at this moment she learn something she aren't understand first. She don't only take the apear of a mermaid. She become one and she is steal like that. Next go into her new bedroom adapted to her new form and speack with the master, it isn't this bad. The other students of the class have to take care of her for have a good note and next an intensiv training, she will probably can use a spell for look's like a human. So probably next 2, 3 months and for the rest of her live, she will be a mermaid who can look's like a human the majority of the time. Next thinking about it, she is happy to what happened.
I have a very big story in mind but I'm not motivate at all to wright it. Each time I try to made something in english, they are peoples who say I'm bad in it... it's true but they only said I'm bad and never explain how I can made progress...
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Comments: 23
FantasyMetafores [2019-03-20 18:38:31 +0000 UTC]
Great story but I have a question
Can she walk when looking like a human or she still bonded which a wheelchair and easy to dry skin?
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tsilver In reply to FantasyMetafores [2019-03-21 07:14:13 +0000 UTC]
She will have the body of a human when she uses the spell, so it is the first option.
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edinjapan [2019-02-22 23:51:22 +0000 UTC]
Nice effort! I like the artwork.
Regarding your English, you may need an editor or a ghost writer to fix your mistakes.
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JS418 [2017-12-05 01:43:31 +0000 UTC]
Your story and picture are great. A good way to improve your English is to read simple books, like romance serials or similar novels. The vocabulary is not too complicated and it will help with your grammar and spelling. I appreciate the effort you made to put your story in English.
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MeliCraftVID [2015-10-23 13:18:52 +0000 UTC]
Make a mermaid with this photo: jaymasee.deviantart.com/art/Ne… ! :3
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tsilver In reply to MeliCraftVID [2015-10-27 13:34:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm into a tf sequence here.
It look's like someone had just post one picture as your request : doctor-grant.deviantart.com/ar…
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Doctor-61 [2015-07-04 14:17:11 +0000 UTC]
You need to adjust the tense of the words. For example, instead of 'she been chosen' write 'she had been chosen'. That's the main issue, try collaborating with someone to proof read your stories and make corrections where needed.
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fares002 [2015-07-01 15:39:00 +0000 UTC]
not judging here, just pointing this out. "Wright" is spelled wrong, it is suppose to be "Write". TO the photomap, great job as usual
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Refno4 [2015-06-30 16:27:02 +0000 UTC]
j'aime bien le contraste entre la fille goth bien maquillée et la queue bien argentée /brillante. par ailleurs on dirait que la texture pour certaines queues de sirène (surtout celles qui datent de plus de 6 mois) provient du bar, un très beau poisson que j'ai eu la chance de pécher!
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tsilver In reply to Refno4 [2015-06-30 16:36:29 +0000 UTC]
Non, sa ne vient pas du bar mais c'est un poisson de la mer pour cette image. J'avais commencé par faire les sirènes avec une dorade grise (un poisson bien de chez nous) mais quelqu'un à critiqué le faite que je n'utilisait pas une image provenant de stock. Alors j'ai utilisé des images de poissons de rivière jusqu'à ce qu'un ami revienne avec une bonne image de dorade grise et que je reprenne mes anciennes habitudes.
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Refno4 In reply to tsilver [2015-06-30 17:05:42 +0000 UTC]
Du griset....je me disais bien que les textures (après avoir revu touuutes les images) n'étaient pas du bar, mais que j'avais vu ça quelques part ! J'en ai jamais attrapé (un gars en a eu un de 500 g devant moi il y a 3 ans) par contre l'année dernière j'ai fait du sar et mon père a eu une belle dorade royale vers Narbonne , qui sont des espèces cousines !
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thegatter [2015-06-30 13:17:11 +0000 UTC]
Very good drawing. Thanks.
As for your story: I would love to read it even if the English is not so good. I think it is better to put your idea on paper and share it with others than not to write it at all! And, just forget those viewers who criticize your English. After all, they don't have to read it if they don't like it!!! I've often taken one of your lovely stories and enhanced the English for my own satisfaction.
So, don't be disuaded, just publish and let the others be damned!
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tsilver In reply to thegatter [2015-06-30 13:35:54 +0000 UTC]
thank you for your support but like I said into the other commante :
"I don't go made this story. You can look what I made for a rp story... And for this picture, I late my imagination go wild...
If I write all I imaginated for made it a good story, I estimate it will take the same place as two chapter of my rp story ^^". Between 10 at 15 pages of words write with a 11 size I think. It's very too long."
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tsilver In reply to bluegill [2015-06-30 13:18:04 +0000 UTC]
thank you.
like I just say to another person :
"I don't go made this story. You can look what I made for a rp story... And for this picture, I late my imagination go wild...
If I write all I imaginated for made it a good story, I estimate it will take the same place as two chapter of my rp story ^^". Between 10 at 15 pages of words write with a 11 size I think. It's very too long."
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uglygosling [2015-06-29 21:09:59 +0000 UTC]
...or perhaps she is saying 'Can someone get me a wheelchair?' ?
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tsilver In reply to uglygosling [2015-06-30 13:16:06 +0000 UTC]
not with the little resume of story I put into the description ^^.
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andspen In reply to DannyAndYoko [2015-06-29 20:11:14 +0000 UTC]
tsilver - Your stories are great, and yes at the same time difficult to read sometimes. If you need help give me your original story and I'll try and use Google translate to interpret the story to the best of my ability, if you'ld like. And slight correction on Your title for your picture it should be read as (Can you change me back, I need to go to another class). Hope this doesn't sound to harsh.
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tsilver In reply to andspen [2015-06-30 13:13:51 +0000 UTC]
Sorry for the late but if someone reply at a comment of another person, even if it is on my page, I don't have report of this message.
I don't go made this story. You can look what I made for a rp story... And for this picture, I late my imagination go wild...
If I write all I imaginated for made it a good story, I estimate it will take the same place as two chapter of my rp story ^^". Between 10 at 15 pages of words write with a 11 size I think. It's very to long.
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DannyAndYoko In reply to andspen [2015-06-29 20:18:54 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, they really need sort their spelling, grammar and word choice... XD
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