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tskye — A dream
Published: 2007-03-12 02:12:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I won't fall asleep tonight,
For fear of waking up without you by my side,
I live my life in a dream,
A dream I won't wake up from,
I begin to see you everywhere,
Everywhere but in my arms,
As I awake from my slumber,
I realise everything was just a dream,
A dream I will never want to wake up from.
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Comments: 6

Tiki-Rongo [2007-06-12 23:59:04 +0000 UTC]

i really like it it reminds me of a song that i listen to a lot

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tskye In reply to Tiki-Rongo [2007-06-13 10:22:45 +0000 UTC]

awww

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Beneath-the-Leaves [2007-03-12 19:02:32 +0000 UTC]

(fears to comment in risk of looking like a poser TT_TT)

but on a simpler critique note, this poem really speaks to me because it's a feeling I can relate to. nice.

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tskye In reply to Beneath-the-Leaves [2007-03-12 22:44:13 +0000 UTC]

(fears to comment in risk of looking like a poser TT_TT) <-- don't say that

comment is good

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Beneath-the-Leaves In reply to tskye [2007-03-13 01:08:45 +0000 UTC]

okay. I withdraw just that little it of comment I left in my last comment.

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Taliionis [2007-03-12 05:59:33 +0000 UTC]

Very very nice

Mitch

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