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Published: 2007-10-19 11:22:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 191; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description Forget the rehearsed lines,
so sick and tired of the same old thing.
Go ahead, say your goodbye,
I am done with your selfish pleas.
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Comments: 10

Mystakaphoros [2010-02-18 03:57:33 +0000 UTC]

I like this. Therefore I am going to rip it apart.
(Much love.)

"Forget the rehearsed lines,
so sick and tired of the same old thing."

Who is sick and tired? The lines or the speaker? Or perhaps the object of frustration?

Also, maybe if this were broken in two (like into two unrhymed couplets), you could achieve even more separation.



I do love this!

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tskye In reply to Mystakaphoros [2010-04-29 02:39:15 +0000 UTC]

Apologies for the late reply.
Thanks for the comments though
I'll definitely think about it!

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not-at-all [2008-04-20 19:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Love this one!
'Rehearsed lines'... clever description..

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Encharge [2007-10-22 00:55:58 +0000 UTC]

I hope that wasn't in real life.

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DephtsofDespair [2007-10-20 00:47:34 +0000 UTC]

Awww.
Four lines, but amazing power.

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Abrainthatleaks [2007-10-19 11:49:21 +0000 UTC]

Again Sorry I hadn't stayed online... I just haven't felt like being on messenger... It wasn't anything... if ya were wonder... I hope ya feel better

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tskye In reply to Abrainthatleaks [2007-10-19 23:25:54 +0000 UTC]

There you are! Come online soon jason (:

Hope I feel better? Cos of this poem?
it's nothing really..haha!

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Abrainthatleaks In reply to tskye [2007-10-20 00:38:39 +0000 UTC]

Good... LOL I thought life could have been getting you down... I'm feeling burned out myself... too much work and life..

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tskye In reply to Abrainthatleaks [2007-10-20 13:27:37 +0000 UTC]

aww man.
take extra care of yourself okay

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Abrainthatleaks In reply to tskye [2007-10-20 22:12:50 +0000 UTC]

Will try... I'm thinking I might go out and do something tonight... Could be good... could be bad...

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