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Published: 2007-05-23 12:20:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 145; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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If only you stayed sober for a moment,You'd realise how you've treated me,
My smiles are now so broken,
You'll be the death of me.
I trusted you with all I am,
Pouring my heart and soul,
Hoping you will listen and understand..
Only to find I was such a fool.
Turned out to be,
I was always the last.
The last one to know,
That you backstabbed
Me.
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Comments: 9
jollymolly [2007-06-12 03:47:20 +0000 UTC]
they say a pictures worth a thousand words but i think a poem is worth just one...wow
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jueneflame [2007-05-27 15:20:33 +0000 UTC]
its really well written ...best is the last phrase i liked it a lot!!
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truely-me-niece [2007-05-26 15:17:51 +0000 UTC]
i cAnt SaY ii kNo ExactlY hoW u FeEL, but ii kNo WaT ur FeEling... and people always say ForGiVe and fORgEt, but ii tried thAt... but WheneveR im aRounD her, nothing feels the saMe. We're Not As CloSe anY moRe but iim HopinG that ONe DaY ii WiLL cuz shE's Mii BeSt frieND, mii RidE or dIE cHicK and ii still love her. NEvEr plaY the fOoL tho, you shouldNT settle for ThaT.
nice piece
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Abrainthatleaks [2007-05-24 11:08:59 +0000 UTC]
Oscar Wilde said, "A good friend stabs you in the front." I wonder what he meant by that exactly? Anyway... I am sorry to hear that someone has been a jerk to you I wouldn't say not to play along 'cause I know how it feels to want it to still work... I'll just say I'm here if you need someone to help get your frustration out
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Beneath-the-Leaves [2007-05-23 18:26:09 +0000 UTC]
"Turned out to be,
I was always the last.
The last one to know,
That you backstabbed
Me."
I understand...
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Tiki-Rongo [2007-05-23 16:02:20 +0000 UTC]
never play the fool .. theres a lot less pain that way.
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