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Published: 2007-04-26 08:24:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 259; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Description You walk into the room,
Approaching me,
My heart racing
and I feel weak.

You stood beside me,
and gaze into my eyes,
Running your fingers down my skin,
I feel an adrenaline rush.

Don't make me fall this hard,
I pray,
Don't let me fall this fast.
I'm falling head over heels for you
and this is bad.

You walk out of the room,
Leaving me,
My heart still racing
and I feel weak.

do you have to let it linger..?
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Comments: 17

jollymolly [2007-06-12 04:06:34 +0000 UTC]

this poem brings up so many memories regret its good i ve read like all your stuff its all good amazing even i dont see how you write so short i can never find a place to stop so most of the time i am just rambiling...like now lol

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truely-me-niece [2007-04-28 14:03:45 +0000 UTC]

lol ii luv this one it made me feeL da feeLIn all Ova again wen ii was readin it, like i was going through it.

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jueneflame [2007-04-28 12:00:50 +0000 UTC]

just like evrybody has said i can feel wht u hav written....its good....

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Abrainthatleaks [2007-04-26 20:59:43 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one. I want to comment on it but I don't feel I should because it has nothing to do with the poem and everything to do with the feel... LOL There is a bitterness inside me
that no wings can take to fly away
and so no one shall find me
usless they come adventuring to my cave

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tskye In reply to Abrainthatleaks [2007-04-27 09:15:58 +0000 UTC]

awww (:
but hey! you commented! and i'm glad you did!

" There is a bitterness inside me
that no wings can take to fly away
and so no one shall find me
usless they come adventuring to my cave "

sometimes i feel the way you do =/

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Abrainthatleaks In reply to tskye [2007-04-27 11:36:11 +0000 UTC]

It's tough because I know there is no way anyone is gonna be like my idea of love... LOL I get wrapped up in it though... if ya couldn't tell...

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tskye In reply to Abrainthatleaks [2007-04-27 16:19:03 +0000 UTC]

lol!
what's your idea of love then?

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Abrainthatleaks In reply to tskye [2007-04-27 21:56:17 +0000 UTC]

It's too perfect. It's mutual but it is also all passion. I want someone that makes me feel wanted and I would be the same for them. It's friends that want to discover everything together because they care about each other so much that they will sacrifice their own wants for that of their lover. I just have this feeling that if that part of me fell into place everything would fit and then I might rise up like a tide with energy and feeling that I cannot contain. It's like the joy would be as great as the sadness...

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tskye In reply to Abrainthatleaks [2007-04-29 03:36:03 +0000 UTC]

you know what?
i feel exactly the way you do.
(:

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Abrainthatleaks In reply to tskye [2007-04-29 11:06:56 +0000 UTC]

Do you mean all of it??? Cause I just thought I was mad and no one else felt that way... LOL

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tskye In reply to Abrainthatleaks [2007-04-29 13:30:07 +0000 UTC]

yup. those whole chunk of words you type. people have different point of views on love i guess..but some of them think the same way.

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Abrainthatleaks In reply to tskye [2007-04-29 22:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha That's a relief... I thought I was the only one that mad... LOL

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tskye In reply to Abrainthatleaks [2007-04-30 06:48:34 +0000 UTC]

oh no worries bout that
some people can be as mad as you are...and urm, i guess i'm one of them?

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Abrainthatleaks In reply to tskye [2007-04-30 11:12:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad... I feel so messed up lately... I'm glad to have someone that feels like I do at least. I used to write to get out of feeling this way but nothing helps anymore...

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tskye In reply to Abrainthatleaks [2007-04-30 12:22:32 +0000 UTC]

If you don't mind, you can always talk to me about it. Though I don't give the best advice in the whole world, but I'll listen

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Abrainthatleaks In reply to tskye [2007-04-30 20:43:46 +0000 UTC]

Alright

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Beneath-the-Leaves [2007-04-26 17:27:17 +0000 UTC]

whoa...it's like I could feel exactly what you were feeling (or at least what you described feeling). nicely written!

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