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Published: 2007-09-08 10:30:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description At the age of 20,
he fell for a girl called Wendy.

At the age of 17,
I fell in love with him.

Young, handsome, intelligent,
he captured my heart with a smile.
Witty, humorous, vibrant,
the first three words that crossed my mind.

He took me out on a date,
and completely swept me off my feet.
It was sweet though,
he didn't try to impress me
with fancy words or flowers.

He was shy
and with a smile on his face,
he was more than happy to let me have the best of him.
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Comments: 6

truely-me-niece [2007-10-07 16:50:40 +0000 UTC]

ii love it.... title [???] lol i dont want 2 say somthing that sucks, so i have no advice!

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DephtsofDespair [2007-09-10 21:23:09 +0000 UTC]

Aww that's adorable.

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Abrainthatleaks [2007-09-08 11:35:41 +0000 UTC]

That's wonderful! It's simple but so expressive! It's nice to get caught up in happiness

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tskye In reply to Abrainthatleaks [2007-09-08 12:58:10 +0000 UTC]

jason..i need title.

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Abrainthatleaks In reply to tskye [2007-09-08 21:22:35 +0000 UTC]

Haha... but it's your work I hate having to come up with titles too... LOL It's hard coming up with them sometimes. It can totally change the perseption of what the poem is about :S

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tskye In reply to Abrainthatleaks [2007-09-08 23:09:28 +0000 UTC]

true
thanks yeah

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