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Published: 2007-09-08 10:30:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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At the age of 20,he fell for a girl called Wendy.
At the age of 17,
I fell in love with him.
Young, handsome, intelligent,
he captured my heart with a smile.
Witty, humorous, vibrant,
the first three words that crossed my mind.
He took me out on a date,
and completely swept me off my feet.
It was sweet though,
he didn't try to impress me
with fancy words or flowers.
He was shy
and with a smile on his face,
he was more than happy to let me have the best of him.
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Comments: 6
truely-me-niece [2007-10-07 16:50:40 +0000 UTC]
ii love it.... title [???] lol i dont want 2 say somthing that sucks, so i have no advice!
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Abrainthatleaks [2007-09-08 11:35:41 +0000 UTC]
That's wonderful! It's simple but so expressive! It's nice to get caught up in happiness
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Abrainthatleaks In reply to tskye [2007-09-08 21:22:35 +0000 UTC]
Haha... but it's your work I hate having to come up with titles too... LOL It's hard coming up with them sometimes. It can totally change the perseption of what the poem is about :S
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